Comments | bsg_slashathon: All the Brightness That Burns Me (Anders/Tyrol PG-13)

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All the Brightness That Burns Me (Anders/Tyrol PG-13)

Mar 16, 2008 20:54

Title: All the Brightness That Burns Me
Pairing: Anders/Tyrol
Rating: PG-13 (mayyybe R)
Warnings: none
Prompt: boots, doorway, need
Summary: They finally find Earth, but Sam expected there to be more.
A/N: Future-fic/some little AU details, beta by super_KC, title from St.Lawrence River by David Usher

( He just needed so badly for this to be worth it. )

fic: anders/chief, event: blind ficathon

Comments 8

boom_queen March 17 2008, 03:45:19 UTC

Oooooh, achey and good. Hurts in all the right ways.

gigglemonster March 17 2008, 05:14:21 UTC

Well awesome, I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.
I'm not a fic writer so i'm very relieved and appreciate that you took the time to read :)

crickets March 17 2008, 05:42:27 UTC

Awwww, Sam/Chief! I really loved this and part of what I love about it is that you establish a history with very few words. I also love that it's from Sam's perspective and Tyrol doesn't come in until the end, it sort of catches you off guard but the way you've done it really works. Seems like maybe they've been avoiding each other. And I gah, LOVE the alleyway portion where he just drags him into the shadows. Hee! Very vivid, again in very few words. And I loved the ending too.

gigglemonster March 17 2008, 05:57:34 UTC

thank you very, very much my dear.
Few words...that's probably my fic writing motto lol.
Anyhoo, I appreciate the awesome as always beta and all the support :)
*muah*!

dirty_diana March 18 2008, 16:18:00 UTC

Ow. Pretty. :)

gigglemonster March 21 2008, 16:18:37 UTC

Hee thank you :)

cynthia_arrow March 21 2008, 08:22:23 UTC

Perfect. In my head, this pairing works so well because they're both so stubbornly stable, holding each other up, even picking each other up. You captured that beautifully. And you captured Sam's confusion so well, too.

gigglemonster March 21 2008, 16:19:43 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it :)
For some reason they've been my favorite pairing from the get go and I really didn't wanna screw it up by writing them myself, so, I'm very relieved that it worked :)
♥