Wednesday, November 21, 2007, 8:00pm

[bsofthewest]

I have been sitting on this since November, working out the kinks. Read and let me know if you think it is good enough to post to the world. Our world that is. Do you think I have the personalities clear? I really need feed back, so I can get past the hurdle of level one. I don't want it to me me in the story, I want you to read them

Comments

[wickedrent1013]

I liked it! I thought the flow was nice and that you stayed true to who you perceive them to be and in my opinion that is the best any of us can do. We write them based on the bits they give us and we fill in the holes to create our perfect version of them. I believe you should write to make you happy and if you're happy with it then that's what matters most!

[bsofthewest]

Thanks, girl. I am now smiling a silly grin and about to bust. Bust.....oh, now you've got me thinking about K again. Thanks!

[wickedelphiefan]

Wow this is really amazing, i think you showed show it to our whole world. I love the 2 different sides and I could so see Idina sat on that couch totally crushed about seeing her only on the t'v and likewise Kristin with sweet dreams of Idina. You should really continue this.

Oh btw is it true they will both be at the oscars.....on the same night....both of them.....in the same room!
If it is true you so have to tape it incase it shows any of them, especially if they might happen to bump into each other. We dont get oscars here :(

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[bsofthewest]

We know for sure about K, but I have not seen anything about Dee. It follows that since she was in the film, yes, but she could forego the telecast and just show up at the parties; of which, she could pick and choose according to the guest list, if you get my drift. At least, that's what I would advise, if I were her publicist (which I'm not, in case you thought otherwise).
Thanks for reading my post. I appreciate your comments. I don't, however, think there is a part 2 to do as it was a snap shot of a point in time.
As to the Oscars, where the Hell are you? We are fed a load of bull that gazillions of people around the world watch this falderol. Is that not true? Do we get lied to? I don't think I can stand the truth! Believe me I trust my chenzelfriends more that the world out there. Someone will have it up on the net before you can blink. Praise be all things chenzel!

[orangepeel]

BS - this is really great improvement!! You really are trying to get better hey? It's an interesting take on Chenzel too, love the ambiguity of the narration. And it should be posted somewhere (though create a backlog of chapters if you do follow through, I don't want to be left hanging)

"She was wearing a knock out dress that had half the front removed. "
- funnnyyyy haha, couldn't that describe ALL of Kristin's PD costumes?

And Kristin's feelings on Enchanted could have been written by me ;), hehe

[bsofthewest]

Thanks, ever so. I am trying here. It makes me happy you liked it, but I think this is a one shot because it is a snap shot in time.
As to "She was wearing a knock out dress that had half the front removed. " My favorite line!!!
Thanks again! Now to think of another fic. Perhaps the Oscars will provide a hint of angst!

[orangepeel]

Oh BS, if only you just how much I am expecting from the Oscars.

Who knows, maybe I will even be inspired! Hehe.

And you know, I'm getting more and more convinced that is Kristin Chenoweth's profile. I think it is.

[bsofthewest]

That would be soooo cool. Why don't you go to her real fan site, where she has posted letters and compare the writing styles. That might prove useful.

[elizagoth7]

That was really pretty good. I liked how the POVs were written. A unique take on the whole thing. Is there more? There should be ;)

[bsofthewest]

Thanks for reading and for commenting. There is no more because I wanted it to be a moment in time thing. I am thinking of posting it to c_l. Think I will! Right now, as a matter of fact. It's your fault if I am stoned....here goes!