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Special (14/20) Part 2

Oct 30, 2009 14:10

Title: Special (14/20)
Summary: All over the world, people are waking up with extraordinary abilities. Not knowing how they got them or what to do, they will soon discover that they are not alone. They are all connected. They are all special. Based on NBC’s Heroes. Various Pairings.

( Part 14 continued... )

fic: special, a/u, fanfic, band of brothers, slash

Comments 4

evo_spider November 2 2009, 19:36:23 UTC

I was so excited when I saw that you had posted a new chapter and a long one at that. Awesome in terms of story progression, but what I liked the most was that you really have done a fine job of incorporating the Heroes mythos into Band of Brothers. I think what I liked best in this chapter was the portrayal of Bill as the protector. If he represents that same familial devotion and protectiveness of Noah Bennet, you could really see it in this chapter. It's all coming together very nicely and I must admit that the part where the founders of the Company being some of the guy's parents was thrilling to know.

I also must admit that I'm looking forward to more romantic interludes and more exciting superhero action. I wonder if Babe really can fly and what awesome display Webster is going to make when he tries to rescue Malarky.

You had a misspell in the part where Winters was talking to Nixon: "I understand. Better THAN you do."

btp248 November 2 2009, 20:13:44 UTC

Thanks I'm so glad you liked it and am especially glad that you felt it was good as far as progressng the story goes. I always appreciate the insights your comments give me. Bill is definitely written in likeness to Bennett, maybe even to a greater extreme in later chapters.

And lol at the misspell notice just because I probably have a TON more in there because I tend to get neglectful towards the ends of the chapters (having been constantly reading over it) but I will for sure fix thanks :)

easylip November 30 2009, 23:26:41 UTC

HOLY SHIT I KIND OF LOVE THIS AU A WHOLE DAMN LOT

I confess, some times, I skip down immediately to the parts with Lipton and Speirs because daaaaaaaamn this is seriously awesome. The way you characterise them and their relationship is extremely good. Also, Lipton is seriously precious and I wibble at hiiiiiiimmmmmmm

PLEASE DON'T STOP also more (Speirs/)Lipton would be great but don't listen to me and do as you wish

btp248 December 1 2009, 00:30:39 UTC

Wow thanks :) and Speirs and Lipton ARE pretty awesome! I try to include all the characters as much as I can but since there are quite a few it can be a struggle to focus on them all equally. And not to worry I def plan to continue and conclude this story. I have a few badass Speirs/Lip scenes for later too! Thanks for sharing your thoughts!