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[btp248]

Summary: Another game of cards and Luz being Luz causes Talbert to reflect on the relationships around him and the lack of any real relationship of his own.

Disclaimer: I don't intend to make any money off of writing this-not that anyone would give me any if I wanted it anyways. None of this actually happened, it's based, as many others say, off

Comments

[yorda_]

Oh honey, you don't suck at all, so don't worry :) I really, really hope you'll write more in the future and continue to share your fics with us. I really like Talbert and I wish he were in more fics; nice of you to give him such a prominent part in this one.

[notjezkah]

I don't know how I stumbled upon this, but as I did, my computer totally fucked itself over and I have spent all of today re-finding this. Thank the lord!

I needed to tell you how awesome this piece is; you have every character down to a tee! The way they act is so like them!
You must do something more with this, please!!!

Uh, again, sorry for this spontaneous harrassment, but it would be an awesome shame for an excellent writer like yourself to abandon this.

[btp248]

Thanks! Yeah I originally wanted to expand on this- maybe delve further into the discussed relationships-but I'm more of an AU person. Plus I'm already working on a story and about to start another one so I don't know if I'll ever get to it. I think it's okay for now. I'm glad you liked it though :)