Comments | bttf4444: I'm going to dedicated tomorrow to as much writing as possible.

bttf4444

I'm going to dedicated tomorrow to as much writing as possible.

Dec 07, 2007 21:26

I did get a little bit of writing done this month, but I have yet to get a chapter uploaded at FanFiction.Net this month. This Monday is icepiegon23's birthday, so I want to get the story up about where Griff takes advantage of both Melody and Jamie. The biggest challenge will writing the story to make it not too graphic - but I'm afraid I'll have to increase ( Read more... )

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icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 13:55:29 UTC

Look just do what you have to do to blend in the story alright. Please. I know that you may have no other choice and besides Miff did take andvangage of Patty so that would fit.

Here's what I have so far of the story.... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 15:48:45 UTC

I'm still in the introductory part.

April 4, 2016
4:00 PM PSTThis was really a bad day for Jamie Brown. Her best friend, Melody McFly, had just been kidnapped by Griff Tannen. As a close and loyal friend of Melody, Jamie quite found it to be her sacred duty to come to her friend's aid. She just couldn't think of anyone else that she detested as much as Griff. He was a menace and a terror ( ... )

Re: Here's what I have so far of the story.... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 15:55:08 UTC

I thought Jennifer, Melody and Suzy beat up Griff. With his bionic implants it would be very difficult to do by herself.

Re: Here's what I have so far of the story.... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 16:03:41 UTC

I thought someone else besides Melody was involved, but I forgot who. Jennifer and Suzy would be perfect, though - as they both resemble Melody.

icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 13:56:52 UTC

Just for the record arent you doing the Haven Universe Chronicle for Stephanie Tannen of christmas eve. which includes the Good Canatas of Bella and Buford along with their gang related cousins.

bttf4444 December 8 2007, 15:50:17 UTC

Yeah, I am. I worked a little bit on that fic last night, as well.

icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 15:52:49 UTC

Could you send me a piece of it as well so i can see what i can look foward to.

Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 16:02:10 UTC

I forgot about the Canatas, but I'll have to add that in right away.

December 24, 2046
12:00 PM PSTStephanie Tannen was feeling nervous about spending Christmas with her extended family. After all, there were quite many on her father's side of the family were really known for being bullies. She quite never got along too well with her cousins, Ziff and Belle. Actually, they were her second cousins - but they all grew up in Hill Valley ( ... )

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icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 13:32:26 UTC

FYI I thought you were giving me my birthday present a day early.

icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 13:32:44 UTC

Not that i'm sounding rude.

bttf4444 December 9 2007, 13:52:02 UTC

Well, I just got up. At the very latest, though, I will have it done tomorrow.

icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 14:52:06 UTC

I'm talking about Benny and Beth's younger sister.

bttf4444 December 9 2007, 15:22:51 UTC

Right, yeah! Billie is fine! She'll be about the same age as Ryan, so she'll probably be 14 in 2016.

bttf4444 December 9 2007, 15:37:08 UTC

Better continue our convesation from this thread. Here's the updated paragraph:

"Are you okay, sis?" asked Will, gently. "Everything will really be fine. We really won't be alone, y'know. After all, Uncle Rhett and Aunt Jill will be there, too - as well as our cousins, Riley and Rebecca. Uncle Ryan and Aunt Billie might also be showing up, and Roxas and Ruby. So, you see, it's not like we'll be completely surrounded by bullies."

icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 15:40:00 UTC

Nice idea since it's getting harder to read from our outher threads. Perhaps we could continue this in the form of FFPMs but this is much more effective.

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