Rapture

Dec 28, 2012 15:55


Both sweat and tears were blurring his vision. His hand was trying to stop the blood to gush out of his abdomen. He ran through the dark, in the quieter alleys of Tokyo. It was almost half past three. Even the usually busy and crowded city was fast asleep. He tried to scream but nothing came out except for the sound of him gasping for air. He’s ( Read more... )

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cherribells December 28 2012, 12:31:37 UTC
-SPEECHLESS-

^ Good speechless. Nuff said.

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bubbleaddiction December 28 2012, 14:32:09 UTC
Thank you so much!!! Really, thanks ^_^

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kumohime102 December 28 2012, 17:15:00 UTC
WOW.

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I agree with cherribells here, no words.

Good work!

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bubbleaddiction December 28 2012, 17:55:37 UTC
aww, thanks thanks!!! :)

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wickedlaw December 28 2012, 21:06:06 UTC
...That was just... amazing

So well written and I couldn't stop reading!

That's about all my brain managed to put together lol

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bubbleaddiction December 29 2012, 02:24:17 UTC
Thank you so much! <3

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haruka21 December 29 2012, 17:48:25 UTC
This was a very interesting read. Thank you for sharing it.

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bubbleaddiction December 30 2012, 01:47:39 UTC
welcome :)
and Thank you as well

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nezu_ri December 30 2012, 18:38:06 UTC
this was very interesting to read!
at first i thought it was tegoshi, but his name showed up first XD
thanks for sharing~

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bubbleaddiction December 30 2012, 23:26:41 UTC
heya thanks :) happy new year

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