Before My Eyes Part 2

Sep 12, 2010 01:12

Title: Before My Eyes

Rating: T

Summary: When Zack was five years old, he decided he wanted to marry Cloud Strife. Looking back, that was probably one of the best decisions he'd ever made. AU, Clack

Author's Note: Killed me to cut this in half, I feel like the whole impact of the story has now been lost. :( Stupid LJ. . .

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clack, final fantasy, cloud/zack, fanfiction

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typezer0 September 15 2010, 20:23:55 UTC
This was really sad, but really wonderful too. I loved it.

But, I have to admit I laughed at "depressing death weather" It's so much like Zack to say/think something like that.

Great job, hope to see more of you :)

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bubblefairy03 September 15 2010, 23:15:30 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! =)
No matter how many horrible things happen to Zack, he'll always be the same old Zack. Most people wouldn't be complaining about the bad weather to themselves on their way out. lol!

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unsolvable September 24 2010, 10:56:14 UTC
Found this by accident and I'm glad I did. I'm pretty sure this is one of the few fics that have managed to fill me with glee in a while and then tear my heart out in part two. Like really, omg. <3 Thank you for writing this. It's been so long since I've read a good Z/C fic.

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bubblefairy03 September 24 2010, 15:46:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy I could have so much of an impact. <3
You know, I really have to agree. There are some amazing Clack fics out there, but there isn't really that much of an abundance. (WHY IS THIS FANDOM SO SMALL!?!?) I read once that if you want to read something, and it hasn't been written yet, then it's your duty to write it. I wanted Clack fics, I couldn't find enough, so I started writing Clack! =D

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unsolvable September 24 2010, 19:50:49 UTC
No problem. <3

Agreed! They're so few and far between and you'd THINK they wouldn't be all things considered but... I dunno, I've written like one or two (I don't even remember where they are actually) but yeah. >_

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bubblefairy03 September 25 2010, 15:52:27 UTC
I know, right! It boggles my mind. Here you have this super hot guy, who Cloud quite possibly could have considered his first and only friend, and who willingly made his escape from Hojo WAAAAY harder by dragging Cloud's comatose butt around. And then he gives his life to protect him, HALF HUGS HIM as he's dying, then causes Cloud to go into all kind of staring-at-the-buster-sword-wishing-you-were-here moping fits.
HOW IS SEPHXCLOUD MORE POPULAR!?!?! Zack gave Cloud his dreams, and Seph gave Cloud a hole in his shoulder. =/ The FFVII yaoi community must contain sooooo many sadists. . .

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rookmartin September 28 2010, 02:47:57 UTC
Whoah... That's just... woah. So sad! This was very well written and was such a great description of a lifelong connection. Ah, Zack and Cloud together again at the end! Love this, even though it makes me a little teary.

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bubblefairy03 September 28 2010, 03:44:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

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