Comments | bubblegumtotchi: Homecoming; hide/Hyde; NC-17; yaoi

bubblegumtotchi

Homecoming; hide/Hyde; NC-17; yaoi

Jul 01, 2008 02:06

Title: Homecoming
Fandom: Jrock
Character(s)/Pairing(s) : hide (X Japan)/Hyde (L’Arc~en~Ciel)
Rating: NC-17
Length: one-shot, 1596 words
Warning(s) : yaoi
Summary: It had been almost two weeks since hide’s ex had had him locked up on a load of trumped-up charges in an attempt to break him and get him back. It had taken every string his ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

duntuchdakei July 1 2008, 06:32:33 UTC

FIRST!

eeeeeeeeeeeeee *_* I heart it!

bubblegumtotchi July 1 2008, 06:33:40 UTC

*blush* Thankies. ^^

kurosawabride July 1 2008, 10:48:54 UTC

*mems it right away*

@_________________________@

*gaspshockdie*

I LOVE IT. We're all dorks, saying we all suck and having disagreements over that. XD

BUT OMG HOT. *______* ♥♥♥

And Totchi's so cute! XD *glomps him* This didn't suck, Mamu. I LOVE the smut. XD Now the plot bunnies have left you in peace. xDDD But they're bothering meeeee. >___>

bubblegumtotchi July 1 2008, 20:29:01 UTC

hahahaha we so are. XD

Meh I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but you liked it, so that's good enough for me. ^^ ♥♥♥

I couldn't resist letting Totchi make a cameo. He's such a dork. XD

Unfortunately, they haven't. Not really, anyway. I still have the Kai/Totchi to finish, but at least these two aren't bugging me for the moment. xP

(and randomly.. OMGICON PRETTY! *__*)

scwolf_10k July 2 2008, 20:53:40 UTC

HOTT!!! andandand Totchi cameo FTW! 8DDDDDDDD

bubblegumtotchi July 3 2008, 02:30:10 UTC

He was insistent. XD

kagome_angel July 27 2008, 21:34:56 UTC

I intended to read this last night, but I was feeling really really really nauseated and bleh. I luckily didn't throw up but I thought I was going to. >_>;;;;; Anyway, I have read now and I LOVE IT. The smut is hawt and sweet and just plain awesome and lovely, and Totchi making an appearance like that made me smile. :) Did you think this sucked? DO I NEED TO WHACK YOU OVER THE HEAD? XD

Aside from the cute and the sweet and the hawt, I really liked this paragraph:

Before they exited the courthouse, Vicky offered to take Sumire to the restroom. After a couple of moments, Hyde excused himself from their circle of friends surrounding them and chattering away. As he washed his hands at the sink after taking care of more mundane matters, he took time to admire the facilities. No shoddy half-assed stalls here, not for the lawyers and judges that passed through these doors daily. No, for them was the comfort of cubicles fully separated by concrete walls and separate doors with real locks.I really like how you described the bathroom ( ... )

bubblegumtotchi July 27 2008, 23:02:05 UTC

*cuddlepets* Ish okies, darling. Your health is more important. ^__^ and LOL You just have a weak spot for Totchi. :P And, no, no need to whack over the head this time. I'm not 100% satisfied with it (but then, I never am XD), but I'm actually rather happy with this one. ^__^

I'm glad you liked that part. <333333333 I worry that I sometimes pay too much attention to the small details like that, but I don't know, they just seem important to set the scene. ^__^