MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JAN-FEB 2013

Jan 29, 2013 10:53

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oppa January 30 2013, 00:40:29 UTC
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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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pirouettes January 30 2013, 05:45:08 UTC
I never expected the friendship these two formed to happen the way it did. The blast has been amazingly fun, it constantly makes me laugh. Especially these two. Their banter, bromance and utter ridiculousness is just perfect. I'm really glad they've managed to become so close. ♥

Your muse really reflects the real to me and the effort you put into him is obvious and wonderful to see. When we scene, it's clear that you have him down all the way to the mannerisms as he moves about. Is it too cheesey to say it's an honor to rp with you? Haha! I hope we can have them hang out again soon!

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oppa January 31 2013, 05:52:52 UTC
I didn't either, not in the slightest but wow am I glad that they did form a friendship! I agree, these two are hilarious but that whole group is loads of fun and has helped Taec in a lot of ways. I'm really grateful they've gotten this close :)

Thank you for saying so, I have become more worried lately how he's coming off to others since things have changed a lot with him and my time has been more sparse. It's really so wonderful to hear something such as his mannerisms are even reflected in likeliness to the real! ;-; Not cheesy at all! I could say the same ♥ I really appreciate all of this so much, I'm sure they will! :)

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soulstrung January 30 2013, 08:52:34 UTC
First of all, I'm just going to make a quick apology for Khun - I need some time to rethink him, the real's all active and about and I need to get in tune with him again so we might be sparse for a while. ^^ Now onwards ( ... )

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oppa January 31 2013, 05:58:23 UTC
No need to apologize! I completely understand all of that, but Taec will be around if Khun ever wants to chat, same for me if you do! :) It really feels great to hear that you see these developments with him, I'm relieved! As far as the history..that will come along in time and they will learn more about each other haha ( ... )

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oppa January 31 2013, 09:47:07 UTC
There's so much I could say about Taecyeon. I'll keep it brief.

1) Praise : He's so much like the real. I know it's hard for other people to see sometimes, but having been lucky enough to delve deeper into him as a muse, it's completely visible just how many layers he has, and how deep his thoughts flow. While his emotions are generally along one track, it's clear that he has other sides to him. He's loud, engaging and really seems to reach out to others.

2) Crit : I don't have any solid crit for you right now, except that it would be nice if Taecyeon also instigated scenes or ideas, though I know we talk about this often.

3) Writing : I've already told you everything :3 Your writing is really superb at times, and then when we scene and it's about 3/4AM both of us get lazy and start slacking. We definitely need to find a way to work on this - and a way to get through scenes a little quicker. They should chat more, too. ♥ ilu

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