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☆MUSES: oppa
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OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
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Your muse really reflects the real to me and the effort you put into him is obvious and wonderful to see. When we scene, it's clear that you have him down all the way to the mannerisms as he moves about. Is it too cheesey to say it's an honor to rp with you? Haha! I hope we can have them hang out again soon!
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Thank you for saying so, I have become more worried lately how he's coming off to others since things have changed a lot with him and my time has been more sparse. It's really so wonderful to hear something such as his mannerisms are even reflected in likeliness to the real! ;-; Not cheesy at all! I could say the same ♥ I really appreciate all of this so much, I'm sure they will! :)
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1) Praise : He's so much like the real. I know it's hard for other people to see sometimes, but having been lucky enough to delve deeper into him as a muse, it's completely visible just how many layers he has, and how deep his thoughts flow. While his emotions are generally along one track, it's clear that he has other sides to him. He's loud, engaging and really seems to reach out to others.
2) Crit : I don't have any solid crit for you right now, except that it would be nice if Taecyeon also instigated scenes or ideas, though I know we talk about this often.
3) Writing : I've already told you everything :3 Your writing is really superb at times, and then when we scene and it's about 3/4AM both of us get lazy and start slacking. We definitely need to find a way to work on this - and a way to get through scenes a little quicker. They should chat more, too. ♥ ilu
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