MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: AUGUST 2014

[bubblybliss]

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[softcakes]

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: softcakes

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Please let me know how you feel. ♥

[softcakes]

it's been ages and ages since our muses interacted, but i always enjoy seeing your jiyeon around. :) she's adorable and playful, while the tone of her writing style hints at/brings out a slightly more vulnerable, pensive side of her. as a fan of the real, i really admire how you play jiyeon so consistently and i'm glad you've kept her as a muse all this time ♥

[softcakes]

You're very sweet for leaving me a kind and positive comment. ♥

Since she has a very uniquely physical way of expressing herself, I found it hard at first to integrate it in the way she interacts online and I'm sincerely very happy to receive a comment concerning this point. It's a great feeling knowing it has the aimed effect on someone. Thank you so very much. ♥

I hope our muses can cross paths again! I struggle to find enough time for Jiyeon to be around and I know it has affected her circle of friends, there's no one to blame but me! I however would like to say that I appreciate and cherish every muse who has taken the time to interact with her. ^ _ ^
Thank you again. ♥

[lucid]

these two only interacted a couple of times before they had their little community together, but it makes me happy that they all clicked really well from the start. i love that they can make fun of each other one moment then show affection in their own weird ways the next. she and sunyoung are exactly what jieun needs in her life because they bring out the spazzy, teenage girl side of her that she never got to be growing up. i'm sorry i have no real crit to offer, but just wanted to let you know anyway that we're thankful for her and we hope to see her around more often!

[softcakes]

I really am apologetic towards both of you for not finding the time to be around more often. Sunyoung and Jieun are also exactly what she needs and I'm so happy to have that for her. ♥

Their community has been really helpful in letting her be the silly girl I know she still is in the middle of everything. Thank you for letting Jiyeon in your muse's life. ♥ I'm looking forward to seeing more in the community!

[calypsosky]

One of the reasons why this guy is still around. ♥

Your Jiyeon is amazing. She seems very well-rounded. From her personal entries to PMs, it's like there's always something new to find out about her. Jiyong appreciates that she isn't afraid of talking about what's on her mind, her insecurities or simply what she isn't good at. It really feels like he could talk to her about anything and not get judged and that means a lot. ♥ Of course I could always say 'Bring her around more!!' but, uh, then I'd be a hypocrite. I'm glad she replied to his PM the other day though. ♥

I'm going to leave out the character crit part, because it's up to you how you interpret the real. Besides there doesn't seem to be anything terribly wrong about her hehe.

Writing wise, we haven't scened much, but I've enjoyed the little scene we played together. I wouldn't mind repeating that some time. (Cheesecake?♥)

[softcakes]

Is she? I'm really happy he's around and if she is one of the reasons he's still here, I'm overthrown! Your G-Dragon is a great muse with a very kind heart and open mind. Jiyeon is very fortunate to have someone as easy-going in her life. ^_^

She was very hesitant about sharing her struggles at first but he has the right qualities, I think, to make people open up. I tried dealing with the scandals as best as I could, while considering Jiyeon's personality, and he has been very accepting about the flaws in her past without showing any interest in the incidents. Thank you for having such a muse. ♥

Please don't hold back if there's anything you find even slightly off about her! In all my good intentions to portray her as close to the real Jiyeon as possible, it is still how I personally interpret her. Knowing how others interpret her might help me explore a different view of her that I might be blind to!

Please look for the cheesecake!

[softcakes]

It's been quite a while since our muses interacted, but I loved his interactions with Jiyeon. As someone who follows T-ara, I think your Jiyeon sounds like the real, and you managed to bring out her caution as well as her playful, childlike side even though our muses only interacted a few times. I hope you continue to play Jiyeon and that when I'm less busy, my muse can interact with her again. <3