MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

[bubblybliss]

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[bombombunny]

amai basil
☆MUSES: bombombunny

starhighway
☆MUSES: bowling4rancho / reverseflip

sarangbox
☆MUSES: hamyeoniii

idolbook
☆MUSES: kevmaster

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

Thought I might as well! Please tell me anything and everything! Positive, negative whatever ^^ Maybe it'll kick start me into being a little more active with them <3 Thank you in advance!

[ayo]

hyung :') haha jinki had the best time getting to know woohyuk through that in comm game and I'm a little sad that they've stopped talking since then. I really hoped jinki would keep with their conversations so he's going to have to do that! he'll just bug him randomly, I hope this is okay.

I don't really know anything about him, but learning about the real through the game and getting to interact with your muse has made me grow to like him! your muse is very nice and I think they could be good friends if they got the chance to interact more. I wish I had more to say about things, but since we haven't scened save for that one time, I'm afraid any critique would be moot. I do applaud you for playing a lesser played muse and for sticking with it. he used to be over at thirdencore, right? I had a muse over there as well and I just think the world of muns who play rare muses. so, I think the world of you! keep it up~

[reverseflip]

I was just thinking this the other day too! He'd love to talk more too, I'm just a lazy butt ;; lmao

Part of my problem with Woohyuk also is I'm never entirely sure where he's at. XD I thought he was filming in China but then he had a concert in Japan randomly, so I don't know. I'll try to start dealing with it if news comes out later, instead of letting it stop me from starting anything! ^^

I just made no sense, but you speak my language by now anyway...

[jiyunit]

I'm staring at this list. How long have I've known you now, and I still had NO clue about some of these. You're the sneakiest ever ;]

Anyway. Onwards we go! Hyunseung... what can I say. Really. Where to freaking start?! :3 Without going to much into detail about their past, I have to say that you two really helped form Jiyoon for me just by being a pillar for her to lean on, to know that she had that friend that would support her no matter what.

Seung is weird, funny, quirky, patient, trustworthy... he's just...one of her closest friend really. Sometimes a little too quiet, and we need to kick him and throw some jellyfish at him for that, but other than that, we love him. Although, with that said, we love seeing him post more!! :D

Seungyeon! Really?! OMFG.

Re: I just made no sense, but you speak my language by now anyway...

[bowling4rancho]

He's too quiet with everyone, I'll try to start throwing him around more often lol ^^ I figure if he posts more in his journal he'll have more to talk about, gives him something to have been doing with his time other than practicing.

Jiyoon's one of his closest friends too, even if he doesn't say much to her all the time <3 He's always known she would be there for him if he needed someone to lean on too. ^^ <3 It's been good knowing J-J-Jiyoonie ^^

Re: I just made no sense, but you speak my language by now anyway...

[jiyunit]

Definitely always there for him! <3 It's good to know that he feels that! :3 Oppa~~ HAHA.

Re: I just made no sense, but you speak my language by now anyway...

[bowling4rancho]

No oppa-ing. :|

[shutterstar]

I'm sleepy, so this isn't going to be as lengthy as I want it to be, but we love Hyunseung, as you know. G would take a bullet for him or something. He and Gina may not talk as much, but Hyunseung was there when Gina most needed a friend. She's the type that would never tell anyone her problems, but Hyunseung just made her feel so comfortable, and telling him what happened just felt ...freeing. There's not much for me to crit on, because I think your boy is spot-on, but it's more of a muse thing for me than an actual flaw in characterization. Gina wishes Hyunseung could confide in her more, but then Gina herself has problems with confiding, though she could have a handful of confidants.

We love you, and chin up, okay, Seung? Noona will always be here, and she'll do everything and anything to see you happy. ♥

[bowling4rancho]

He was happier than he could say that she trusted him enough to even be there <3 He doesn't have much to confide lol /unbusy boy But he knows she'd be a good option to go to if he did need to talk something out, or just hang out with ^^

Thank you so much~ ^^ He'd lie extravagantly about what he'd do to maul anyone that hurt her. lmao <3

[gizmo_da]

I just want to say that I love Woohyuk so much, and I love that he's still around. I'm not really used to that.

I'm also very, very sorry that Hee Jun doesn't talk to him as much as he should. I generally just fail with Hee Jun so much, and it makes me nervous to have him talk to people. Especially when it's people he should be close to.

I'll try to work on that when I figure out his AIM issue, because he loves talking to Woohyuk when it does happen.

I have no idea if this comment fits in ANY of the given categories. "general praise"? Let's go with that. D: I ♥ Woohyuk.

[reverseflip]

/o/ We plan on being around for a while~ <3

Woohyuk doesn't either -.- dalorian. lmao We love Heejun! He really enjoys talking to him and is always amused. I hope Woohyuk at least gives him a chuckle now and then XD I'll try to poke more often too ^^ <3

[bombombunny]

I feel like you have a good idea of Bom and what she's like but that's where it ends. She's not technically bad, or anything, but I think she's 2D flat and lacks life. For example, she relies too much on being cute because the real is cute in her own way. However there's not much substance to her cuteness. It's also how I feel about my muse's conversations with her. They rarely go anywhere past the basic 'Hello's and 'How are you's.

Overall she isn't bad, really, but it would be easier to talk to her if she had a bit more distinctive personality.

[bombombunny]

Aww I'm really sorry you feel that way. I'm aware that she comes off kind of flat in online conversations though, maybe if they could meet? I've been struggling to make her as random as she appears to be often on 2NE1 TVs and such.

Also though, Bom's a pretty shy person, and the reason she acts as crazy as she does on the shows is because she's comfortable, so I often don't get to show that side of her until later on with her interactions and I think maybe people give up on her before she gets there.

I'll try to work some more life into her though in text and scene alike. Thank you so much for commenting! I need to hear that she's still not shining like she should <3

[bombombunny]

That's good you're aware of it and I understand how her bein' shy could be the case. My muse will definitely try to talk to her more because we really hope to see her shine. ^^

[bombombunny]

She'd love to talk more with anyone <3 So I'll try to work on making it worth it to spend the time on her and maybe she'll get more chances to come across ^^ If it still doesn't get better though please let me know~ I'd hate to give a bad impression of Bom since I love her so much <3 Thank you thank you~ ^^

[erominji]

We like your Bom, but I have to echo the person above. When talking, Bom comes across as more than spacey - she seems to not really care as much as she should. It's hard to find a lot of depth to her, but we really want to see something else come out of the relationship between these two.

We've brushed against your Hyunseung in the past, and would like to say that he is well played as well.