MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

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[allhailchan]

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☆MUSES: allhailchan

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

We've been around for a while now, but we still have to gain some confidence and obviously there's a lot of room for improvement, so any comment would be much appreciated. Feel free to leave anon comments or PM.

[softremix]

[softremix]

... and I better not replying this again. Just because. :|

[yunhotime]

... I don't know how much more my heart can take!

Aww.

[softremix]

[beauty]

Jessica gets really tired of Changmin being so mean all the time. I know that this is part of his public persona and all but sometimes it really feels like that's all there is to your muse. Perhaps if they'd had the opportunity to talk on AIM it might be different, but we never see you on? This could be a timezone issue, of course - I'm in a strange one, honestly. Despite his obvious snarkiness though, Changmin is a mature, deep-thinking guy, and I've yet to see that from him. Perhaps a little more EQ would be nice - when Jessica posted about being icy lately and his response was to turn her into a snowman, it was kind of a shock! Maybe she's a little oversensitive right now, but she was hurt that rather than any sort of concern, he offered a mean joke. ^^;

[allhailchan]

He's not being mean for the sake of it, and we really didn't want to give you that impression. I think that's mainly because we've met on aim just once and in comments we just tended to tease, without really giving more depth to it. The snowman joke was a clumsy attempt to make her smile, obviously totally failed, we're sorry about that: we surely didn't mean to hurt her more than she already was. We'll try to be on aim more often, that's our mistake, and we hope we'll make up for it and you'll find there's something else to him other than the snark.

Thank you for taking the time to write this ^^

[beauty]

♥ Then I'm really looking forward to it! Thank you for responding to me, it's really great to hear that it wasn't meant the way it came across. As I said, Sica is a little oversensitive right now too. I hope they can bond soon!

[rising_heart]

So, you might not like to see anything coming from me, but I supposed I would share a few things

[allhailchan]

That's not true, I'm thankful you took the time to tell me your opinion

[rising_heart]

Well quite honestly I was sort of offended when Yunho offered an apology and Min seemed to have completely ignored it. The complete silence on your end made me think things ended very badly despite efforts

[allhailchan]

Offered an apology? Did you send me something, perhaps? I just saw your Yunho leaving and didn't know what to make of it

[rising_heart]

Yunho sent Changmin a long message about why he dropped...did he not get it? O_O

[allhailchan]

We didn't get anything °-°

Not at all ^^ I'm glad we fixed this. Now we'll both have a starting point for improvement, mh?

[rising_heart]

@-@ Would you like me to resend it? I might still have it in my sent messages maybe?!

Me too! I will definitely start working on it!

[allhailchan]

If you still have it somewhere, it'd be nice ^^ Just to know what's written in it, I'm curious.