MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: MARCH 2012

Mar 04, 2012 20:44

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namuwoo March 5 2012, 10:39:21 UTC
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☆MUSES: namuwoo

Idolbook
☆MUSES: thedragonwriter

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Since I missed the last one, I'll throw my boys in this time around! I don't mind harsh honesty, but keep it constructive please. ♥

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protoss March 5 2012, 12:11:34 UTC
I worry about me/Hongki being... too much for people so I don't always communicate with Jun like we'd like to, but when I do we love him a lot. I like how they tease one another without having that nagging worry in the back of my mind that one of them will get offended (I think anyway...)

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thedragonwriter March 5 2012, 12:29:00 UTC
Aw, that's too bad! You don't need to worry. Jun/I are very overbearing, especially when it comes to awesome people. :3 I really like their dynamic too, and you're right in thinking that way. Jun doesn't get offended at all when they tease each other. I think they're already a lot like best friends who can say crap to each other and just laugh about it even if they don't talk as much as I'd want them to! But yeah, we'll do our part to reach out more to you guys too. ♥

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protoss March 5 2012, 12:45:14 UTC
Hongki doesn't know a mute button, so I worry a lot he's in everyone's face since I'm far more shy as a mun than he is as a muse ._. Normally I play much quieter people but he just wouldn't go away! Sometimes when you tease people you can feel that uneasy edge, but with Jun I know he can say anything and it not come across weird. If it won't be too annoying, then Hongki will reach out more too. ^^

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thedragonwriter March 6 2012, 07:41:55 UTC
Hahaha, that's so cute! He really won't mind him reaching out more at all. He encourages it, actually. So glad we were able to catch you guys. He's really been wanting a Hongki around forever. ;~; ♥

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reclothed March 5 2012, 12:48:58 UTC
Everytime he sends her a vgift/something on a meme/whatever he makes her think "Oops, I really neglected our friendship!!" HAHAHA..... and it's the truth so he should keep doing that and one day her lazy butt will IM him lol.

Serious mode.

Junhyung is pretty chill. And they really need to start talking again. -_-; I think there's nothing I can write down which I didn't already tell you at some point (though honestly I can't remember if I ever sent you crit/praise...) .... He is pretty chill. /bricked.

The reason why I'm actually mentioning that is, it's not necessarily for everyone to be like that! haha I mean, it feels like he wouldn't be all "Yeah, you haven't talked to me in ages go away :|" to her. It's a coming and going, somehow... and honestly maybe that's how their friendship works. Idekkthxbye. /)_-

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thedragonwriter March 6 2012, 07:44:35 UTC
LOLOL. It's okay, I don't think their friendship is one that calls for a lot of maintenance? It feels like they can pretty much pick up from where they left off and I like that they comment to each other here and there and keep their relationship pretty chill.

Thank you though! I'm glad you feel that way. XD He's not the kind of muse that would brush someone off just for not talking to him for a while. He isn't that much of a social butterfly even if he seems like it. He's a bit more reserved and likes keeping his relationships at a comfortable level. But yeah, I think that's definitely how their friendship works and I like it a lot. ♥

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dragyula March 5 2012, 13:01:42 UTC
Eii I'm going to crit on you now because it's easier for me and I, am lazy ♥

To be honest I have to say I am really happy to see a more shameless and dickish Woohyun come around every so often! Especially in the group blasts, twitter and comments. He seems to be more like I see him behind the heart's and smile's facade and I really, really enjoy when he's being a douche (..... what).
I would like to see it more with Sunggyu though! I think the both of them are still very... complacent and nice when it comes to each other. Which makes sense to be honest but I do think there would be times Woohyun would be more abrasive or a bit more selfish. Basically I'm waiting for the day they both get a little annoyed that they're around each other constantly and kind of snap. I don't think either of them are exactly the type to tread carefully around each other when they get into those moods and can allow themselves to go all out before settling back to their healthy relationship ( ... )

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namuwoo March 6 2012, 07:50:25 UTC
You suck. ♥

Yeah, I've been trying to take into account what you said in the last crit about making him more boyish, more teasing, and... dickish. XD He definitely needs to learn how to be like that around Sunggyu, though, I agree. He tends to let his affections overpower, because they're such good friends and y'know. LOL. He'll become even more annoying, selfish, and abrasive soon enough. 8D/ But yeah, I'm seriously waiting for that too. I don't think it's too far away with how things are going. It's going to take a while, still, but they'll get there.

That was a part I was really concerned about bringing out. I didn't want to play on the fact that he does throw his heart out a lot at people and lets it be superficial and that's that. I definitely feel like he cares immensely about the people around him, those who are closest to him and he feels like he wants to give them the best he can. So I'm glad that that's shining through ( ... )

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byungari March 5 2012, 13:05:20 UTC
I know you hear this a lot, but Woohyun is really lovely. ♡ (Though you're even lovelier and that's saying something! ♥) Okay, bear with me on this... ^^; I think I probably got sidetracked a lot ( ... )

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namuwoo March 6 2012, 08:10:57 UTC
I definitely feel the same way. Like I said on your crit too, I'm really glad they can pick up basically where they left off whenever they talk. It's really comfortable how they're able to and makes me really happy. :3 ( ... )

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bakji March 5 2012, 14:21:53 UTC
since jiyeon hasn't been that active on aim and reached out enough (which is my fault) i can't say anything really except that i/jiyeon really enjoy their brother/sister friendship, hehe.

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thedragonwriter March 6 2012, 07:45:05 UTC
XD I'm glad. ♥ We'll get them to talk more, I'm sure!

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keybang March 6 2012, 23:43:17 UTC
while I still don't know a lot about the real (dflkjdf must remember to research!!), since the last time i left you something, i feel we've gotten to see a little deeper side of woohyun than we did before. their friendship still isn't to the place that the reals obviously is (and can i just say how CUTE i think they are, going out and shopping together all the time and stuff?) but that is mainly my fault. i'm really hoping i can get back on track to feeling comfortable playing him so we can continue to deepen their friendship because i really like every aspect i've seen of woohyun so far and i think my appreciation of him could only grow. ♥

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glamours March 7 2012, 06:12:38 UTC
I don't really have any character crit or writing crit for you. If you don't know how my kids and I feel about you and your muses by now, then you'll never know~.

Although Bora and Woohyun don't get a chance to talk as much as they have in the past (mostly because of our schedules conflicting, lol), she still adores him. You know she loves people that she can be silly and be herself with, and he's definitely one of them.

As for Junhyung.. ah, how do I put this. Dongwoon looks up to him so much, not only as a hyung but as a best friend. I know that I haven't been able to keep him super active as of late, but please know that Junhyung is one of the most important people in his life as a muse and otherwise. Long story short, he would never make it through his downs if he didn't have Jun around. He loves him so much, more than he could probably ever really express properly. ♥

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