Who wants to be bothered by my loserish spanish projects

May 03, 2006 21:40

a. I would first like to mention that I have not paid attention in class at all like the past three weeks ( Read more... )

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iheart_myshoes May 4 2006, 02:16:40 UTC
Bien bebe is buen bebe.

ella dijo que peleaba...

desde el dia que ella nacio [accent on the o]

iba a la primaria [not escuela de primaria-primaria means primary school]

Recuerdo, que me encantaban...[you're talking in past tense]...los animales, y para mi cumpleanos...

En uno de mis cumpleanos [this is if you want to say "on one of my birthdays...]...sostuvo una serpiente. [serpent is serpiente and its femenine]

..en los primeros an~os

Yo nunca jugaba, siempre me abrazaba a la pierna de mi padre. [you can't really say i hugged it's more like i held on to]

era una miembra OR un miembor

y tuve mucha...

[this sentence is techincally right but it's more right if you say] Desde que empeze a jugar me a encantado el deporte de futbol

Me gusto usar los jeans y las camisetas.

Soy una miembra OR un miembro

[this is ok too, but it would sound better this way:] del equipo de tenis y equipo de volibol....

...son mejores jugadores. [new sentence] Pero todavia me divierto jugando estos deportes.

charlar [you can say platicar it's ( ... )

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iheart_myshoes May 4 2006, 02:20:17 UTC
above i spelled miembro wrong the first time and its supposed to be empeze{accent on the e} HA jugar

also its me gusta usar jeans....

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iheart_myshoes May 4 2006, 02:20:40 UTC
ok forget the HA but remember the accent on the e

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your_chimera May 4 2006, 02:35:26 UTC
I'm not as helpful as Isabel, but I have one thing

"Ahora, yo no recuerdo cuando era pequeña."

Maybe this is like a stylistic thing, but I think "Ahora, yo no recuerdo mi niñez" sounds better.

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