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buddhist_babe2

The Only Two People in The World

Feb 25, 2010 17:12

This is technically a companion piece to my other fic, Peter, Interrupted, but can very easily stand alone. It's still in the process of being beta-ed (by notferretkun ), but I was so excited about finishing that I had to post it right away.

enjoy!

The Wall was where it always happened. Fitting, somehow, with sledgehammers tossed aside in a moment of ( Read more... )

the only two people in the world, sylar/peter, the wall, peter/sylar, gabriel/peter, nc-17, peter/gabriel

Comments 15

lornrocks February 26 2010, 01:28:04 UTC

Wow, that ending was heartbreaking. I'm so glad you're continuing this, I love this storyline you have going.

Lovely.

buddhist_babe2 February 26 2010, 20:29:52 UTC

I'm so relieved that the heartbreaking wasn't a bad thing. I keep fearing that I'm putting too much of the character trait things we already know and not enough of the fictional relationship we all want!

haha, it's kind of why i wrote this, too. Cause in my other one they didn't have sex.

lornrocks February 27 2010, 00:19:21 UTC

Well, keep it up. :)

dancingdragon3 February 26 2010, 03:14:18 UTC

Wow that was so good. Really Hot!

“That's it.” Sylar mumbled. “That's it. That's it.” I don't know why, but this line just struck me.

xD buddhist_babe2 February 26 2010, 20:27:33 UTC

it struck me too, hee hee :3

a_little_push February 26 2010, 03:43:38 UTC

Gah, just gah!

This was about a million times better then all of my stories and I can't wait to see if you continue it. Just- something about it made me really feel for the two of them if that makes any sense. :)

buddhist_babe2 February 26 2010, 20:26:48 UTC

surely not! I've read you're stuff (though I haven't exactly warmed up for girl!peter yet lol)!

I'm glad you were able to connect with the characters that way :)

holyromantic February 26 2010, 09:10:57 UTC

I loved loved loved this fic. Such strong feelings, bittersweet. And the ending... great. Would you continue this?

buddhist_babe2 February 26 2010, 20:25:25 UTC

well, this is really just a little flashback before i write a sequel to my other one. But I definitely will have to come back to The Wall at some point, seeing as it is basically the Petlar holy chalice now. lol

grindell107 February 26 2010, 16:23:54 UTC

:fans self: :tries to regain composure: a-hem, yes. That was quite heart wrenching. Makes me hope the boys find a happy ending, even if it takes a while.

Favorite lines:
"the world ended, and for once Peter just let it happen." ~squee
"Sylar's voice was deep and gravely, coming from somewhere deep inside his body." Wonderful imagery.
You also hit on one of my kink here big time, the repetition of words and phrases. Just...god, I'm a puddle of goo.

buddhist_babe2 February 26 2010, 20:22:45 UTC

xD I'm glad you liked the repetition! My beta keeps growling at me about fragments and whatnot lol