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Oct 24, 2004 21:17

hey everyone i ahev been thinking lately, and here is a product of my thoughts, i am not sure if it is a poem, but w/e it is i would love feedback, comments and help gladly accepted..please tell me a respose to it or how u feel about it ( Read more... )

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budist_hippie69 October 24 2004, 22:22:55 UTC
one more thing everyone, there a re a lots spelling mistakes so bear w/ me

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x_escape October 24 2004, 22:28:26 UTC
well, it looks like you're trying to make metaphors but they don't seem to be making any sense.
but i agree with the anger you have against ignorant people.

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budist_hippie69 October 25 2004, 15:56:20 UTC
anger against ignorant people...where did u get that? and metaphors ya a few...teh rose and everything but it is related to the cycle of life...saying that it will not come naturally under the present human rule and that teh rotting tree will stay forver and the rose will never blossom, we must build the rose our selves and not rely on teh natural cycle of life

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