Two past experinces of two people grounded on this lonely planet

[budist_hippie69]

The following poem was written by Matthew's cousin, Megan Shepard. It was read at Matthew's funeral in Casper, Wyoming

Comments

[_nicotine_nails]

There is something about your poem that threw me off. I think it might have been the repetition. But in general, I thought it was nice that you described a lot of things and connected them to each other.

[budist_hippie69]

what do u mean threw u off?

[_nicotine_nails]

Like the poem didn't feel in unison.

[budist_hippie69]

ok thanx i will keep it in mind