Drabble fest entry. 4 BBM drabbles

[buffymonmon]

I´m new to writing drabbles but I wanted to do something for the drabble fest over at
bmm_drabbles so I tried it out. Here are three short drabbles. the promts I have used are:  #1. Postcard.  # 2. Waiting outside Aguirre´s trailer.  # 3. Swimming

Postcard

Riverton was different.

The air easier to breath, the horizon closer and the sun basked instead of punished

Comments

[sienata]

these are all so intense, really deep and full of things to think about. they all are interesting, but Swimming really got me.... i think it's a dream, and as such, it makes a world of sense to me. i could never see jack actually acting on his misery, but i could see him - in his darker moments - wanting to.

thanks for writing. these are wonderful. :)

[merrimania]

I don't know anything about drabbles or the complex world of BBM-fics, but your writing is inspiring. I loved the image, and the melody, of the line "a young stud duck bouncing behind the wheel." Keep up the good work. I firmly believe that expressing oneself is how to keep sane and happy. :) Thank you for sharing this.

[buffymonmon]

I know that reading fan fiction from a universe you are not taking part in is quite tricky, so thanks for reading and commenting anyways:)

[big_heart_june]

You write brilliantly. I loved 'Postcard', absolutely loved that drop of freedom...
I'm with all the rest about 'Swimming', I read it over and over, it's gripped me and I don't exactly know what to think..

Thank you so much. :)

[blackbird_y]

These are just...wow.. your writing is amazing. I don't really get Swimming yet but it is haunting nevertheless. Thank you.

Nev