The Bodyguard. chapter 1.

[buffymonmon]

Title: The Bodyguard.
Raiting: NC17 (overall)
Fandom: Brokeback Mountain
Disclaimer: The characters of Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist belong to Annie Proulx.
AN. This story is different from Vita Nova, both stylistically and thematically. I needed to write something more light-weight, and this is the result.

Summary: Inspired by the movie "The Bodyguard"

Comments

[buffymonmon]

Oh yeah! They are in for one hell of a ride!

thanks for reading!

[lara_pinta]

This is fascinating. What a great start, you certainly have my interest.

Thank you
Lorna

[melinda70]

Ohhh!!! Wow! They have a past already!! That was a surprise! I love this start to the story.

And I wanted to rub your face in it. Show you that when you ended it with me you made the biggest mistake of your miserable life. God, I hate you so much Ennis, that sometimes, I think I´m gonna die from it."

Yeah, sure Jack, sure. I totally believe you ;)

Looking forward to more!!

[lulu_kitty]

This is an interesting start! I can't wait to read more... I wonder what the story is with them. Can't wait to find out!

[thelastaerie]

omg... you go love to create a love/hate relationship Jack and Ennis story, don't you?

I love this first chapter. Very promising :P