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bugz_aroc

Game Recognize Game

Aug 25, 2010 01:12

Title: Game Recognize Game

Rating: T

Summary: Tilting his head back, Randy once again ignored the burn as he thought about his own story. They all had one.

Warnings: None

Disclaimer: I own nothing and no harm is meant. Seriously people, this is FICTION.

Beta: None, all mistakes are mine.

( Game Recognize Game )

fic, centon

Comments 9

angrbooa August 25 2010, 08:47:39 UTC

Beautiful.

Very well developed writing style IMO.
Also very nice relationship between them, but not klichee or too fluffy. Very realistic, adult-like. Me likes.

"Earth to Centon
Haha, Evan :)

charlievh August 25 2010, 10:52:02 UTC

Wow, I was hanging on Randy's every word/thought. He reminded me of Sawyer from Lost somehow (and that's never a bad thing). Didn't even miss the romance, your style is so... professional, captivating, dunno what to call it - but I hope you write more. I also really like your characterizations of the WWE superstars ;-)

letdwn_downtown August 25 2010, 14:09:54 UTC

I love the way this was written. Gorgeous.

bugz_aroc August 27 2010, 03:54:43 UTC

Thank you. <33

takerbay August 25 2010, 16:05:28 UTC

I had to laugh at the line with Swagger going Angles way I thought I was the only one who noticed that. Love this story showing Randell more than just a pretty face.

bugz_aroc August 27 2010, 03:54:06 UTC

IKR....Me and my little brother were talking about the similarities one night and it all just kind of fell into place.

Thanks for reading!

legacychickno1 August 25 2010, 18:19:39 UTC

Really fantastic. I dunno what else to say. Just the way Randy analyzed first his co-workers "stories" and then his own. Just brilliant, plot-wise and writing-wise :)

bugz_aroc August 27 2010, 03:59:47 UTC

Thank you. <33

It was an idea floating around for a while especially the codiasi portion, I think almost everyone has done a variation on them.