Silent Love

May 23, 2010 21:43



Title: Silent Love

Rating: M

Summary: Muscles quivering in a way he knew no other man or women had been able to bring about.

Warnings: Smut

Disclaimer: I own nothing and no harm is meant.

Beta: None, all mistakes are mine.

Silent Love )

fic, centon, codiasi, codenaton

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centon_4eva May 24 2010, 07:52:56 UTC
You should write more smut. That was Awesome!!

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bugz_aroc May 25 2010, 12:34:53 UTC
<3333333333333.

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legacychickno1 May 24 2010, 10:35:46 UTC
Totally agree there... more. This was just brilliant. It didnt sound too pornographic -like it often does when people write smut- nor did it sound like too fluffy or something. It was just perfect.

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bugz_aroc May 25 2010, 12:36:43 UTC
Thank you so much, lol. I was freaked out when I wrote this since it was my first time.
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killaqueen May 24 2010, 18:27:19 UTC
Oh wow, I don't even have the words but I'm going to try anyway.

Such an intimacy between the two of them, even their shadows partook in the sinful act.

That was just heart stoppingly beautiful.

No words were spoken once the door closed. Clothes were carelessly discarded onto the hardwood in their haste to make it to the bed. Hands touching, stroking and grabbing at whatever skin they could reach, lips never really disconnecting.

That gave me the internal happy sigh, such great writing that really creates an intense image.

For the most part, silence accompanied their lovemaking. The only sounds being each man's heavy breathing and panting when air became a necessity, an occasional gasp or whimper, even a few growls. No words though.

ALSO, just beautiful.

And then the rest was just mm, hot DAMN.

This was amazing - the last line knocked me over.

MORE PLEASE!

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bugz_aroc May 25 2010, 20:19:29 UTC
If I haven't said it before, shame on me. But I love to read your comments!!!!

By the way, that intimacy line, glad you loved it because I was hesitant to use it at first. I thought it sounded kind of dorky, lol. Go figure!!

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rosyakamrsrko May 25 2010, 20:09:50 UTC
that was amaaazing, I agree with the others, you should definitely write more smut =) great fic

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bugz_aroc May 25 2010, 20:21:24 UTC
This is crazy since I never thought I'd take that plunge, but at every one's instance I guess I'll have to try it again in the future, lol.

Thanks for reading!!!

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nomprenom May 25 2010, 22:54:26 UTC
Ohhh yeees, I finally found the leave a comment button. I read this yesterday and wanted to comment, but I just couldn't see it ):

I loved every inch of Centon and Ted/Cody <3 The only thing I didn't like was the Candy bit, but that really doesn't have anything to do with you or your writing (loveable and likely to suck you in, I must say), it's more of a personal issue with the pairing.

Toooootal love, and, hell YES, you should keep writing smut! You're totally good at it.

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bugz_aroc May 26 2010, 01:55:14 UTC
The comment error has happened to me also, weird, lol.

Thanks, totally blushing right now. *pathetic, I know*

Okay, definitely more smut in the future!!!

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