Bittersweet Hero

[bugz_aroc]

Title: Bittersweet Hero

Rating: T

Summary: How he played Superman, stopping a speeding bullet. Only...he didn't use his chest and he didn't exactly walk away unscathed. In fact...he didn't walk away at all.

Warnings: none.

Disclaimer: I own nothing and no harm is meant, seriously people.

Beta: None, all mistakes are mine.

Comments

[legacychickno1]

*grins with some tears in her eyes* beautiful. That's pretty much the only thing I can say about it. You perfectly describe their emotions, their fears, their loves, their lives. It always amazes me to no end.

[mysticbridge]

That was beautiful. Smartly written, a nice balance of angst and fluff that I always enjoy in a story. Thank you.

[bugz_aroc]

Thanks! I was definitely afraid that some of it seemed forced or a bit rushed, so I'm so glad it felt real.

:)

[angrbooa]

Oh god, I was so afraid that you'd kill him +___+ I just hate character death, it makes me so sad.

But I really, really liked your story. You have such great writing skills, it's astonishing. Things like this:

For Randy, the tension he felt earlier came back in full force. Almost suffocating him with its intensity. Not just bad nerves, no. Alarms were going off like crazy in his head. But as he took in the blond's appearance he almost wondered if he might be finally losing it.

I loved the whole scene in the shop. It was so real, I can see it before my eyes. And oh, that poor Misses Gabriel, totally afraid of Randy, lol.

So many details I enjoyed, but what I liked most is that you didn't kill him, but made him unable to move his feet, which would be - as we all know - hell for John Cena. Pure hell. And oh, the "I'll stand by your side, no matter what" scene, awww.

Thank you so much for posting this.
Thank you.

[bugz_aroc]

Oh god, I was so afraid that you'd kill him +___+ I just hate character death, it makes me so sad.

Oh I know what you mean. Though I've done it before,I decided to give the boys a break.

I loved the whole scene in the shop. It was so real, I can see it before my eyes. And oh, that poor Misses Gabriel, totally afraid of Randy, lol.
Oh good, so glad that came through. I was afraid it might have been a bit forced or rushed. And Mrs. Gabriel, lol, a little fear never hurt anyone.

you didn't kill him, but made him unable to move his feet, which would be - as we all know - hell for John Cena. Pure hell.
Oh yes, without a doubt.

Thank you so much for reading!!

[angrbooa]

(Sorry this comment is late)

I was afraid it might have been a bit forced or rushed.
Not at all!

Thank you for posting!

[christinalp]

wonderful