Comrad Ren to Comrad Stimpy...

[buio_omega]

an orchestra is hiding behind your mouth

Comments

why do you hate it?

[broodmood]

i have a suggestion: leave it as it is. this is its pure form- why change that??? even our poetry that makes us crinnge cuz we think it's bad (which this is not- it's excellent), teaches us more about our technique and style.

miss you!!! happy new year, love!

--m

Re: why do you hate it?

[broodmood]

hahahahaha- that was cringe, not crinnge- lovely ;-)

Re: why do you hate it?

[buio_omega]

Hope your new year is going well too! Thanks for the suggestion regarding the poem, I want to write more but I'm always getting blocked up or just can't find the way I need to say what I want to say :P

hahahahahahahaha

[broodmood]

*Comrad Ren to Comrad Stimpy...*

you didn't title it this way at first, did you??!??!?!

if you did, i totally missed it!!!

that is soooo great :-)