I love it! Great mixture of dry information and Ten's quirkiness. One tiny thing: in the third-to-last paragraph, "interpreted" should be "interprets" in order to keep the tense consistent. Other than that, it's terrific. I love the way you used my prompt.
Well, it was a really fun prompt. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the correction; I went over it several times when I found I'd been changing tenses, but I must've missed that one.
As someone with a bit of this (not from regeneration ;) I think you made it very realistic. Especially considering mine is at it's height when I am out of it. Great job darling!
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