Challenge response #1

Aug 09, 2007 10:03


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dorky, doctor who, fanfic

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honorh August 9 2007, 16:11:28 UTC
I love it! Great mixture of dry information and Ten's quirkiness. One tiny thing: in the third-to-last paragraph, "interpreted" should be "interprets" in order to keep the tense consistent. Other than that, it's terrific. I love the way you used my prompt.

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bulky_monster August 9 2007, 21:13:57 UTC
Well, it was a really fun prompt. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the correction; I went over it several times when I found I'd been changing tenses, but I must've missed that one.

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glamourcorpse August 9 2007, 16:36:28 UTC
As someone with a bit of this (not from regeneration ;) I think you made it very realistic. Especially considering mine is at it's height when I am out of it. Great job darling!

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bulky_monster August 9 2007, 21:12:51 UTC
I'm grateful for the confirmation of my efforts, and glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for reviewing ;)

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