Fic | All of Me

[bunnothun]

Title: All of Me
Author: attilatehbun
Fandom: Young Avengers
Pairing/Characters: Teddy Altman (Billy Kaplan/Teddy Altman pre-slash)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1200+
Prompt: The Good That Won't Come Out by Rilo Kiley, from which I chose the lyric As they chart up your insides and put them on display./They'd see all of it, all of me, all of it.
Author's Notes: For tussah

Comments

[tonko]

Ah! Woobie Teddy, but then fuzzles at the end

Billy grins, hugely, and for a second it's like there's no other light in the warehouse but Billy's smiling face, and Teddy's heart does something complicated

Perfect moment, after the setup. <3

(Also fond of the image of Billy's eyebrows doing a wiggly dance when he's surprised and confused. You have these little turns of phrase that just go.)

[attilatehbun]

Teddy has a lot of woobie potential, it is true. ♥

I'm so glad you liked that moment; it was a real favorite of mine writing it.

Billy's eyebrows are also a favorite. They are just so expressive :)