Fiction: A Straight Line

[buoy]

First time writing for this canon and pairing and first time writing fanfiction at in over half a decade, so please, any concrit, suggestions, or etc are highly welcome. ♥

Title: A Straight Line
Author: buoy
Summary: Jim wants more than he can actually take, Spock relents and lets him. Written for the st_kink_meme prompt originally posted here.
Rating: NC-17

Comments

[laura_trekkie]

Very hot, with just a little bit of angst and a little bit of 'awww, sweet' added to the mix. Yay.

Laura.

[greenteaduck]

Very hot~ I love Kirk still being stubborn and trying to take control of the situation no matter what~ Great job^^

[cleokoneko]

Oh.My.God. I think you killed me! *fans self*

xZx

[azraeljt]

great fic..
more?

[no_detective]

DUDE!!!!!! How did I not read this sooner?!?!?

This is so, so hot. SO HOT. I love Jim's coping mechanism - he's got to be at least a little bit of a masochist to get beat up THAT BEAUTIFULLY in the movie - and you deal with it really well here.

*fans self* This is awesome. I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

(Er, is this where you post your fic? Should I friend this LJ?)

[buoy]

Ahh!! Thank you! <3 I'll friend you from my main journal. It's dissociate, but I'm pretty inactive. (lol surprise? XD)

I wish I wrote more, but I don't have the time and have a terrible habit of...not finishing. OTL