Fan Fic: "Alterations"

[burdenofrage]

Title: "Alterations"
Characters: Razer and Aya (Razaya)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,704
Summary: A future "what if" scenario that takes place a few months following "Homecoming." Razer and Aya are growing ever closer, seeking a little intimacy with one another, yet Aya's inability to physically feel like an organic life form remains an issue.
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Comments

[aviaq]

OH GOD.

I had to log into my ancient LJ account just to tell you:

THIS MAKING ALL OF THE DREAMS COME TRUE JESUS CHRIST.

What I particularly like is how it touches on how despite being so full of rage Razer in most of the first season, he is so gentle with Aya as the series progresses.

Everything in this fic is tender and loving and IN CHARACTER.

Thank you so much for writing this.
This is all I've ever wanted. :UUUU

[burdenofrage]

Thank you so much! <3 I was so nervous about posting it, initially, so I'm really glad that you liked it and that it's been so well received. Getting feedback like this really made the work I put into this fic worthwhile. X3

[hinodeh]

OMG, this is too adorable for words! I love how you characterized Aya, and how curious she is, and same goes for Razer. He's so careful but also a bit awkward because he needs to explain all this to Aya and doesn't want to take advantage of her.

[honor_raconteur]

This is TOTALLY, amazingly CUTE! It was exactly the kind of fic that I was in the mood for. I really liked the fact that you kept them totally in character as well. Kudos!