Love to hurt (7/?) -Uruha/Ruki

[buriedinheart]

 Title: love to hurt.
Chapter: 7/?
Author: buriedinheart
Genre: angst, romance
Warnings: abuse, language, pain, sex, self harm, eating disorder, suicide attempt
Disclaimer: I own no one. 
Rating: PG13 
Pairing: Uruha x Ruki
Bands: the GazettE
Synopsis: We were pieces of driftwood floating in the raging seas, tornadoes and angry hurricanes.
Comments:  '&&' = different

Comments

[chokladvanilj]

I really didn't want to make you feel like a bad writer! Don't think like that, you really aren't.
I used an online dictionary for this chapter and since I know now that you jump back and forth in the story I understand it much better. I just got confused with the other chapter.

I feel like a stupid person for not understanding XD

Very angsty chapter, I wonder if they will ever have a healthy happy relationship again - I hope they will so that it will be a happy ending.

Will be waiting for next chapter <3

[buriedinheart]

well i hoped you gained better understanding. and i cant help it, i have this bad feeling angst is like my main genre - which is bad because i want to become a better writer and one can only do so by experimenting and practice.

thanks so much for reading and commenting, im glad you liked this fic. forgive my insecurities :(

[chokladvanilj]

Yes I did.
Yeah I know, you told me before :) But I can at least hope that they make up, even if there will be alot of angst in the story. I like reading angst ^^

It's okay to be insecure, I am too :)

[buriedinheart]

sorry ><

but yes~ there is a happy ending

[puucho]

I felt a lil bit sorry for Uru even though he was so cruel to Ruki at the start.. but I can't help it as u wrote this chapter so well.. xD

btw, did I find smth between.. ReitaxRuki in this chapter ?? and Aoi x Uru in the last one... sorry my mind is quite twisted.. x_X

I hope things get better between Uru and ru though... waiting for next chapter?? (｀▽｀)

[buriedinheart]

YES YOU SMART GIRL.

you smart girl you.

yes!!! hahahahaha im excited >< i shall try to write asap! shouldnt take a couple of days!
thanks so much for reading and commenting ^^

[alteregosadist]

And now we're back into Ruki's side of the story. :) You do a really good job dividing the story between Ruki and Uruha, it adds so much more depth and emotion, without letting one overshadow the other. Makes me wonder what will happen once they're able to meet each other face-to-face and talk.

What I also love is that everyone has a role to play. Aoi, Kai, and Reita may not be the central characters in Love to Hurt, but you do a great job placing them as supporting people. Their concern and confusion for Ruki and Uruha is geniune. Aoi drives Uruha home when he's intoxicated despite his grudge. Reita gives Ruki space when he tells him to do so, but is by his side as soon as he senses something is wrong. It shows the connection they have as bandmates and companions, looking out for each other when trouble rises. No one's ignoring anyone. Brilliant.

He just feels a medical numbness. This line caught my attention. Simple, but ut sums up Ruki's state of mind very well.

His guilt still nags at him though, and he tries to calm this

[buriedinheart]

you're amazing, taking the time to actually construct what you thought of the story in proper analysis and coherency.

im grateful.
you make me write. thank you.

[buriedinheart]

Don't wanna reveal that yet ^^ thanks, your words flatter me. Hope you enjoy the rest of my writing as well.

[houee_96]

Eh!Ur stories are really good!(Sorry for the late notice)><
Would you mind adding me?I'd like to read ur personal fics^^

[buriedinheart]

hi, thanks. i have been away from fandom for quite a while so seeing your comment was rather encouraging. im working on a fic at this very moment. :)
and i have no personal fics.

thanks so much for your comment, it really reminded me to write. :P