Falling Apart (3/3)

Mar 21, 2014 09:04

Title: Falling Apart (3/3 ( Read more... )

user: burning_arrow, fanfiction: cara/kahlan

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burning_arrow March 22 2014, 23:03:31 UTC
I'm glad you got over the trauma of Part 2 enough to enjoy Part 3. ;-) I will always be a shameless romantic, and until we get some honest to g-d, main character lady loving in fantasy and sci fi, I will also shamelessly promote alternate visions of LotS and other works/shows. :D Love will prevail in all forms.

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bsofthewest March 22 2014, 22:05:39 UTC
I don't care how many parts there are...they are all wonderful. Thank you.

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burning_arrow March 22 2014, 23:04:21 UTC
You are absolutely welcome! Thanks for reading and commenting - the feedback is very motivational!

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astscott21 March 23 2014, 16:26:03 UTC
Thanks for keeping the LOTS fanfiction alive and well. It is because of writers like you that we can have happy endings even though the shows we love don't seem to think so. Even though LOTS is no longer on the air it is great to see people are keeping it alive in are hearts and giving us great C/K fics. Thanks again looking forward to more stories from you.

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burning_arrow March 25 2014, 01:30:34 UTC
I'm doing my best, and props to the other authors out there who are doing it too! And thanks to you too for reading - it takes both reader and writer to make this work. And one day, even when the series we like give us what we want, I hope that there will still be inspiration to keep fanfic alive! (Dare I ask what other shows have earned your ire?)

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astscott21 March 25 2014, 02:01:34 UTC
I will tell you that Lost Girl is one of those shows that has so much potential but yet caters to all the fandoms who knows maybe season 5 will be good. I like the show because it is different and unique. It can be frustrating sometimes but I still watch, but the fanfiction is so much better the writers there do a really great job with the characters and telling there stories. I mostly read at fanfiction.net. thanks for asking about my accident I was fine nothing really happened it was just frustrating and a why me but it keeps me living for the now instead of the what could be.

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burning_arrow March 27 2014, 02:00:44 UTC
Lol, yes, I fall in and out of love with Lost Girl too, though my current obsession is Once Upon a Time. Talk about a show that makes me want to throw things and seriously, femslash aside, there are definitely fanfic writers of all stripes and orientations who do a better job than the screenwriters. And yet, I keep watching...

Accidents are most certainly good reminders to live for the moment!

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tailog March 23 2014, 22:16:30 UTC
That was lovely, I always knew Cara would bend for Kahlan hahahahahaha, but seriously that was a great story, can't imagine Cara being courted in any other way.
Continue creating amazing stories and stay awesome!!!

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burning_arrow March 25 2014, 01:37:37 UTC
Yes, Cara does need a firm hand (or two) to show her the way. Yeah, I can't deliver witty puns - sorry about that. I'll stop trying before I hurt something. ;-p

Thanks as always for reading and commenting!

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katvrah March 24 2014, 20:12:29 UTC
Wonderful story as always.I can't imagine Cara being smt else except MordSith but it makes sense since she won't be serving the Lord Rahl any more.But why couldn't she make love to Kahlan without the RadaHan?Was it because she hadn't said "I love you" yet?

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burning_arrow March 25 2014, 01:25:34 UTC
I'm so glad that you liked it despite some of the directions that I chose to go! I debated the whole 'to be or not to be a Mord'Sith' thing. It's definitely weird to think of her not being one, but it was also an interesting concept and I wanted to play with it. As I told another person, in many ways I think not serving the Lord Rahl and D'Hara would be more disturbing to Cara than losing Richard, as much as she values him as a friend.

As for the Rada'Han - the thing is that it's not simply love that protects Richard from confession, it's ABSOLUTE love. It has to be strong, pure and deep enough that there's nothing for confession to grab onto in a person's psyche. I'm not saying Cara won't get there (she will of course!!), but I thought that this early on, the love is still growing and is a bit tenuous. She's still got too many regrets swimming around in her head. And that's probably me just over-thinking things, which is how this went from a smut piece to a three course deconstruction of Cara's identity. ;-p

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