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Jun 22, 2004 21:22

Wrote a new song... don't worry- it's not autobiographical ( Read more... )

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xxx_unv_me_xxx June 22 2004, 20:57:39 UTC
i like i like <3

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burningpages June 22 2004, 21:02:07 UTC
thanks.... i hate the last two lines of the last verse, though. oh well.

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simplicity iahab June 22 2004, 22:54:31 UTC
I liked the last two lines the best actually... funny what one man sees as trash another picks up and it makes thier life better... odd, makes one think... but i liked those two last lines funny as it may seem...

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Re: simplicity burningpages June 22 2004, 23:25:08 UTC
i like the idea just not the wording... i dunno.. something in there grates at me.

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