Comments | burnt_eyes: control freak (2/3)

burningleaf in burnt_eyes

control freak (2/3)

Dec 24, 2011 19:15

control freak (2/3)
nc-17
yoosu (?) (or junchun? idek. you judge)
angst, smut (pwp? xD)
un-betaed

junsu needs to have complete control over his life. yoochun never stand a chance- except this one time.

( Your body is a wonderland- )

!fic: control freak, !chaptered

Comments 28

lamerk December 24 2011, 14:39:23 UTC

fail? what fail are you talking about? /hyperventilates
and water, where is my 2L bottle of COLD water?! *Q*_____

burningleaf January 6 2012, 22:17:33 UTC

/passes cold water

*________*

i shall do better next time around sobs ♥

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burningleaf January 6 2012, 22:18:03 UTC

hahaha thank you for the support ♥ YOOSU FTW!! ;DDDD

rinmi December 24 2011, 17:38:08 UTC

Women i dont know if i should worship u for writting the best smut ive read in a loooong time or slap some sense into u for thinking that was fail. Omg.... that was fucking beautiful. Hnnnng. I agree it is hard to write smut esp with emotion n one that is different than u plain sex in a hit come and release i seee in so many ffs. God that was gorgeous. Have more confidence in urself bb. Ur smut was sexy. Junchan taking control in yoosu is love. Ridersu ftw!

burningleaf January 6 2012, 22:18:54 UTC

er little dongseng sobs sangkyuuuuu ♥ i shall still try to do better in the future *______* sobs ilu ♥

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burningleaf January 6 2012, 22:19:22 UTC

heheheh. crossed the bridge of no return, all right. xD ♥

A+ vanillatwicks December 25 2011, 02:31:15 UTC

So, twinnie. I was wondering why was I somehow pulled into lj this morning. And then I saw your post and went fuuuuuck now I know why.

A+ for a job well done Dani! /whacks your head. What is this failure you're talking about missy?? That is one hawt scene I've just read! (There is some confusing parts but 'tis not that important don't mind lil ol'me)

You're one good writer twinnie (I always wondered why you opted to delete your journal back then :/ but, that aside, I've always adored yer writings.) Ngl, those boys up there is doing a super hawt mcdirty yo! I is approves! :DD

Re: A+ burningleaf January 6 2012, 22:27:00 UTC

HAHAHA YOU ARE MY SEKRIT NINJA AND WE HAVE SIXTH SENSE CUZ WE ARE TWINNIES AND WE ARE OSM LIKE THAT ;DDDDD

/pouts and pets head sadly

i need to work harder on my characterization sobs *____* be there for meh while i do my best plz ♥ ah, i deleted it back then due to er. religious reasons. why am i back here again i dunno cuz it defeats the purpose of deleting that journal in the first place >.> but sobs. sifu! teach me more!

i hope to see bump soon. i miss the little kiddo.