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paper cranes: interlude iv

Jan 03, 2012 00:15

paper cranes (interlude iv/?)
jae-centric, jaesu
pg
angst, AU
paralysed!jae verse

jaejoong learns the price of forgiveness.

( interlude iv: you and i know what it's like to be kicked down; forced to fight; but tonight we're alright; so hold up your lights; let it shine )

!fic:paper cranes, !chaptered

Comments 13

fallen_reya January 2 2012, 19:52:59 UTC

i pity yoochun here... he's being the mediator and he'll be left alone in the end... jj deserves his fate and junsu, is just as pitiful... you really tormented them.

*waits for next part not-so-patiently*

burningleaf January 7 2012, 18:26:11 UTC

aw. don't worry. i have something planned for my yoochun *____* besides, it is a jaesu, lol. i portrayed him the way i do so that i dont do the cliche love triangle thing lol, since the person who requested doesnt want that angle. :)

next part is up darling, hopefully you like the jaesu bit lol *0* thanks for reading and commenting ♥

n3uromanc3r January 2 2012, 21:41:52 UTC

I liked Junsu's (or rather Yoochun's) version of the previous chapter so much!

I'm so curious about those airplane tickets, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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burningleaf January 7 2012, 18:27:24 UTC

haha it's always fun to write the yoosu part, i must say *______* thank you for sticking darling ♥

han_seoul January 3 2012, 00:52:03 UTC

I literally brightened up when I saw this update XD anywayssss,
:( I feel so bad for jaejoong... Even though he deserves it, I hope him and junsu can make up!
Update soon!(:

burningleaf January 7 2012, 18:28:12 UTC

aw i've never seen your name before...? glad you're happy i'm updating lol! the next part is already up, thank you for reading and commenting~ ♥

elvenknight16 January 3 2012, 14:32:12 UTC

The update is lovely~
I really enjoyed it Sweetie ^^

burningleaf January 7 2012, 18:37:23 UTC

aw sangkyu bby ♥ finally i'm writing the lovey-dovey part for the next parts and boy, dont i love some loving scenes instead of angst lol xD

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burningleaf January 7 2012, 18:42:25 UTC

aw glad you're here ^^b haha of course i'm putting junsu in yoochun's care lol, he's the ultimate guardian angel in this fic \*0*/ i think... a temporary separation always works to set things straight and reorganize your train of thoughts.. just not too long plz ;;;;;;

yes, 2 more plus an epilogue, i think. reconciliation in progress yeay! i've updated; thank you for sticking around darling ♥