To Be Touched

Aug 23, 2010 12:19

Sherlock Holmes knew John Watson absolutely.  Like a precious novel, so love worn the words are rubbed illegible, but felt sightless like a reverberating mantra bouncing off his bones.  As common place as his name or the address of their home but devoutly kept.  Holmes had memorized the doctor as one returns to that book that burrowed somewhere in ( Read more... )

character: watson, author: burnt_hamster, character: holmes, warning: slash, warning: rape

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Amazing saddest_laugh August 23 2010, 20:51:54 UTC
I knew you were a great writer, but wow. This is amazing. Do you even know how amazing you are? I loved it. Holmes is so in character, and poor Watson at the end just broke my heart. Great job.

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Re: Amazing burnt_hamster August 26 2010, 23:11:24 UTC
Thank you so much!
What kind words, you really made my day! ^_^ And certainly made me want to write more.
Thanks again!

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john_loves_paul August 28 2010, 12:03:33 UTC
Wow that's so good. Holmes' hopelessness felt so real and the ending was so perfect!!!

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burnt_hamster August 29 2010, 13:58:30 UTC
Thank you! I was a little worried about the end. It seemed a bit abrupt.

Thanks for being a loyal commenter! It makes me happy! ^_^ You are wonderful!

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