Of Long Legs and Callused Hands (Part two of two)

Aug 29, 2010 08:41

John’s hands were bunched into the fabric of his shirt.  Sherlock could feel the fingers digging into his sides.  Focused on that instead of the sharp wet pain ripping its way up his body.  He knew how to shut his body up.  Could will it to feel nothing.  Nothing but John’s hands at his sides, convulsively opening and closing.  He was lightheaded ( Read more... )

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how_to_shine August 29 2010, 14:02:44 UTC
this is amazing - tremendously sad and moving, and beautifully written.

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burnt_hamster August 30 2010, 01:10:51 UTC
You are wonderful! Thanks for reading!

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burnt_hamster August 30 2010, 01:08:37 UTC
Well I hope it was a good cleansing cry. Thanks for reading!

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f_flowers August 29 2010, 22:04:47 UTC
I hardly ever cry at fics, but I'm definitely crying now ;_;
Beautifully done.

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burnt_hamster August 30 2010, 01:09:36 UTC
Crying is good for you yes?
Thank you so much!

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jellybubble September 2 2010, 22:17:47 UTC
Tears! Tears from me! I hope...they better meet in the afterlife. Or reincarnation! Dammit!

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doves_wing April 23 2011, 02:12:33 UTC
... those driving videos scared the shit out of me, and clearly they made an impact on someone else. -_-;; Argh. This was... unbelievably sad. What really struck me was that you wrote Sherlock scared, and that rang extremely true. Lovely.

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