Comments | burnthe_city: with your heartbeat next to mine

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with your heartbeat next to mine

Nov 14, 2010 19:40

Title: with your heartbeat next to mine
Characters: Nate/Serena
Rating/Word Count: pg / 555
One-Line Excerpt: Don't go don't go don't go, he thinks.

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Comments 4

dae_dreemer November 15 2010, 03:51:15 UTC

This is so beautiful and vaguely tragic and THEM. ♥ I love the tone and pacing and THIS:

back from Europe with a new lilt to her words and a new tan on her skin but she still has his world in her eyes.
♥♥♥ Naaate.

So much love.

sonam_bitts November 15 2010, 04:19:31 UTC

LOVE! Nate and Serena are like two people who are meant to be but never can be. This is my favorite line to summarize them. You just added a description to it. Very beautiful!

kaylamarie2209 November 15 2010, 09:26:57 UTC

oh, oh, this is just beautiful.

He goes home in his slacks and blazer, sans shirt, so drunk on her that it never occurs to him that coming together might have broken them apart.

perfection.

illuminanted December 7 2010, 19:55:54 UTC

SOOO unbelievably beautiful...