each beautiful vertebrae

Apr 13, 2004 05:35

i yearn for some warm body between my arms. just a touch where the black, sequined gown falls to the small of her back, my chin by the nape of her neck ( Read more... )

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godista April 12 2004, 23:10:01 UTC
Woman like nothing more than a well crafted lttr, truly.

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godista April 13 2004, 03:05:33 UTC
as in: E

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E burntnorton April 13 2004, 09:10:40 UTC
omfg!!
i remember, burgess told me when the branches of the trees rapped against my window during the storm. earwicker!!! E upright!!
and also the dead insect... i dont have that on my keyboard tho.

C is very apt for Cove and Covet (the mouth shutting). and i like the way Clue sounds (? lodged on the lips). though Clean (or cleanse) emphasises something too antiseptic, as if the tongue was being stripped with an acid (choral bleach of chlorine).

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Re: E godista April 13 2004, 11:47:47 UTC
You write a lot like my Boylan here, almost exactly. I'm shivering.

Burgess on FW is most enjoyable. I mean, for the gasps.

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opioid_insect April 13 2004, 01:40:18 UTC
I want to lie with him but he wounds me with his doubts.

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prithee, let my whisper attend to your patient ear burntnorton April 13 2004, 22:04:20 UTC

this particular swab (my love), a brief slog of listerine on its damp front, stings at point of contact with the open wound. yet the sting of uncertainty is also the killer of doubt, the healer of raw flesh.

is this the contradiction in pain which can make it feel so good?

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Re: prithee, let my whisper attend to your patient ear opioid_insect April 13 2004, 22:50:46 UTC
the doubts are constant.

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the literature of questions burntnorton April 13 2004, 23:07:07 UTC
i would ask:
of whose doubts do you speak?
but instead
a blossom of
sorry?

i would like to talk to you now and not be so enigmatic. so you could talk about him. reconstruct him as words so as to capture the essence you receive from him.

to make some degree of solvency in what is too firm for opening/adaptation.

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