Comments | burntsuns: APH fic | These Uncertainties (1/3)

burntsuns

APH fic | These Uncertainties (1/3)

Jan 18, 2011 20:43

Axis Powers Hetalia | These Uncertainties (1/3),
Arthur/Alfred, pg-13 for swears and such, 5764 words
When their car suffers a minor crash in the English countryside during heavy snowfall, Alfred and Arthur find shelter in an abandoned house in the county. And a night alone together in a freezing house brings about more surprises than either of ( Read more... )

pairing: arthur/alfred (aph), fanfic, fic: hetalia

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iggyxalfie January 19 2011, 09:18:44 UTC

god that snow *remembers* at least in england they got snow days :L Here in the Netherlands we just had to go to school AND WE HAD JUST AS MANY INCHES!

It's really cute and I really like it! I'll be waiting for the next part ^^

burntsuns January 19 2011, 09:25:53 UTC

Really? Man, everything was closed over here. It was insane.

Thank you! <3

iggyxalfie January 19 2011, 13:42:13 UTC

no problem!
that's so weird! almost nothing (except the airports) was closed!

runecat3 January 19 2011, 23:27:24 UTC

I feel your pain. XD; The school I attend (I'm in the US) is infamous for never having snow days no matter what. D; Unless there's something physically wrong with the school or we're physically unable to get to school, no matter how many surrounding schools are closed, we always have school. ^^; S-sorry for the randomness. :3 I just never thought I'd see anyone else that had the same problem (that's not from my school). XD

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buddha_loves_me January 19 2011, 22:05:49 UTC

lol my side of the country reacts to snow in much the same way as England does. XD So I can absolutely sympathize with poor Arthur here, haha.

This is awesome so far! It's a great start, and I can't wait to read more. :Db

burntsuns January 20 2011, 13:35:56 UTC

haha really? I know over here it was complete chaos for a while.

And thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it <3

kasumicc January 19 2011, 23:58:58 UTC

I think this is wonderfully written and the characterization's very accurate. Also, I really like the setting! And the tension and denial at the end is almost unbearable x'D

Will be waiting for the next part!

burntsuns January 20 2011, 13:36:37 UTC

Ah thank you so much, I'm glad you think so. :D <3

Amazing work! richuninja January 21 2011, 05:19:39 UTC

I think this is an amazing plot you have going! Maybe a few minor grammer errors, but nothing noticable. I bet if you went through it, corrected those minor errors, (if it wasn't a fanfic) it could be published (in at least a school magazine), I would definitely pick up a copy!!! I love every bit of it, and can't wait for more! o^^o

Re: Amazing work! burntsuns January 22 2011, 22:46:23 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much. Yeah, I probably missed a couple of grammar errors - I'll have to go through it and see if I can catch them, thanks for letting me know. And thanks for reading and commenting! <3

Re: Amazing work! richuninja January 23 2011, 06:00:50 UTC

Your welcome! I enjoyed reading it, my first fanfic, and I loved it! o^^o

sephydark January 21 2011, 21:29:27 UTC

Oh man, this is amazing. I love all their bickering--it's so very them. And the UST in here is so thick, I could cut it if I had a knife. I hope it gets solved (like it won't be, heh)

I will be eagerly awaiting the next update of this thing XD

burntsuns January 22 2011, 22:48:28 UTC

Ah, thank you very much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. ♥