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May 31, 2005 17:49

Title: Maff-ia
Rating: 15. I suggest Sushi to stop reading after a few paragraphs. ;D
Part: 18
Pairing: Eventual JayBourne
Dedicated: Everyone reading
A/N: Nats wanted it "REALLY smutty", and as you know I can't do smut. *edfgkihr* So yeah, I know this sucks, I'm sorry, I did my best. <\3

Listen to the monkey, feeding on your brain )

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kana___ May 31 2005, 17:03:02 UTC
You can write smutt way better than me, that's for sure.

I love the ending.. ^_^

<3

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sazzlebee May 31 2005, 17:23:16 UTC
I've just finished reading all of the parts, and i'd just like to say WOW!!!! Tis REALLY good! (I am aware that is un original!) It's all really well written and none of it sucks!

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balinese_baby May 31 2005, 17:23:58 UTC
Jin the smut was great. The more you write it the better it will get.

Great part, more please Jin.

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stefanie_s May 31 2005, 18:59:57 UTC
He’s got such a cute laugh. Actually he’s got a cute everything.

*agrees with that*

*loves*

*wants more*

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exit28 May 31 2005, 20:49:19 UTC
*dead*
Smut, snuggles, AND a penis'd donkey?! WHAT HAVE I DONE TO DESERVE THIS GIFT?!
And there is no way on this Earth that this chapter could be considered shit. No way, José.
♥♥♥♥

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jinn_ay May 31 2005, 21:13:47 UTC
I love you.

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