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bustyoursword

HOW'S MY DRIVING

Dec 22, 2009 02:05

HOW'S MY DRIVING

How's my driving post!

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*But don't feel like you have to be anon, I'm really chill with crit
*Spamming me is okay too
*There is no forth note
*We are all satisfied

Comments 5

anonymous January 17 2010, 23:53:47 UTC

I have been meaning to do this for awhile, but I'm just now getting to it. However, I am of the opinion that you're in need of some crit when it comes to playing Cloud. Yes, I have taken into account the point in the time line where you have pulled him from, which I believe was not a very wise idea, considering where your cast mates were pulled from. Also, because beginning game Cloud has the personality of a boot, and that has a lot to do with his memory loss. I know you want to develop him from that point and play out his, I suppose you can say coming of age stage, however from what I have seen you have kept him extremely bland and uninteresting. Part of what makes Cloud, Cloud is the experiences he faced during the original game and finding himself. Without those experience he's a stoic being that has no interesting features. He doesn't have a personality because in his brain there's a crazy man picking at his memories and messing with his mind, in order to mold him into the puppet that he needs ( ... )

bustyoursword January 18 2010, 00:20:10 UTC

First, before I say anything else, let me tell you first that I really appreciate you stepping forward and leaving me feedback on him. As much as I love playing him, I certainly do recognize that there's a good chance I need a lot of work on him ( ... )

anonymous February 27 2010, 12:04:33 UTC

I really hope that you plan on stepping up with the canon update of yours. There are a few of us that are getting tired of your character squatting, your trolling, and your excuses.

If you don't improve, there's a chance you're going to be out right ignored.

livemydream March 17 2010, 10:03:13 UTC

You know what your Cloud is missing? Sex with Zack and lots of it. Nevermind the fact that they are both into chicks. So boo! You don't play Cloud with enough gay undertones.

LMAO! I'm just playing dude. I don't really have any crit for you. I just wanted to say that I do enjoy bouncing Zack off Cloud whenever we get the chance.

PS: Turn off the reCapTcha for logged in users yo!

anonymous March 20 2010, 20:20:57 UTC

I’m a big fan of Cloud’s character, so I can’t help but follow some of your interactions at amat. So far I haven’t been all that impressed unfortunately. I know you just had a canon-update with him, so he’s somewhere around Aerith’s death, so of course that will have some affect how he interacts with a majority of other characters, but I feel like your Cloud is so…bland. Cloud as a character has always been a man of few words and he’s altogether socially inept, but that doesn’t mean he’s boring. Most of the responses I’ve read lack any real substance; it feels like you’re just going through the motions to fill a comment and that you don’t really care all that much ( ... )