The Absence of Chloe - SUBSTITUTION Three

[butifulyletdown]

SUBSTITUTION Three (Day 9)

This chapter will be broken up into 2 different installments. Here's the first.

Light, gentle fingers trail his scalp, threading through his hair. Feeling a slight weighted dip in the cushions, Clark groans trying to turn away from the invader of his space but his path is blocked. He grumbles in annoyance, the hand combing

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[butifulyletdown]

I am still in the process of writing. I hope to have it up within the next day or two or four :) Just kidding. I'm glad your still enjoying this. Thank you.

[simplytoopretty]

I love Martha. I've said that before and now I'm repeating it because I simply adored your Martha. Her line, "Tell Lana we’re having a family dinner tonight. Everyone’s coming." was just awesome. That's my Martha. Thanks for giving me that :).

In terms of the update, well, this chapter was as usual full of awesomeness! I'm just loving the Clark dream sequences. So revealing and I'm so hoping Clark figures out the meanings of his dreams and acts upon them.

[butifulyletdown]

Thanks. I love Martha too. It was really difficult to get Martha where I wanted her to be without having her tooo all knowing. But whatever. I'm glad you liked my version of her. And thank you. I enjoy the dreams immensely. Definitley my outlet, with all the Blahna!

[legendarytobes]

I need to be more coherent, but I love this more and more. I love teh back and forth of the cousins, how Kara is so wise and concerned but also so good at calling Clark on his crap. I liked the talk about Lana just being like a mini human and Clark being mammoth and how it would never work at all. I am so glad Martha is there and I thought the insight about her and Jonathan coddling Clark too much in some ways was very smart and probably true, not like they knew better at the time. Finally, and as always, teh dreams seem to deepen the mystery and to enhance the story and I want Clark to be ready terribly!

more please ;)

[butifulyletdown]

Thank you. I am glad you're still enjoying this. I completely enjoyed writing Clark and Kara ribbing, or more so Kara ribbing Clark. She loves her cousin alot. And I feel in a lot of ways she's as frustrated as we are with Clark's willful blindness. I am also happy your satisfied with version of Martha.

And I LOVE writing the dreams, so it makes me smile that they are being well received.

Thanks again. Hope to post next part soon.

[butifulyletdown]

Wow! Thanks. Would it be wrong for me to enable your addiction if I post another chapter? LOL. The dinner I hope will be as explosive as I imagined. I hope! And yes the dreams are very telling. Thank you again. I am so happy that you are still enjoying.