Fic - Say When

[butifulyletdown]

Title: Say When
Pairing: Chlark (of course)
Rated PG13
Disclaimer: Own nada
Summary: Clark remembers what happened after the first time he walked away.

A/N - Written for September 2009 Chlark 24/7, theme: Season 2.
Spoilers for Tempest, Vortex & Doomsday. 
Note for story purpose Pete learned of Clark's secret during the events of Vortex.
Song - "Say When

Comments

[chaliebrown363]

You really should write more often, b/c this was awesome. I love how you don't know who Clark is talking to at first. I was like "Is he talking to himself?" And I love that he's gonna have to fight for Chloe b/c she's not giving in to him, and it's as it should be. This was a great read!

[butifulyletdown]

Thanks so much for the kind words. :-) I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I've been really lazy in writing but I hope to improve on that in the future.

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

[butifulyletdown]

This was the total sweetness!frosting to the awesome!cake that is Chlark.

Why am I suddenly craving sweets? lol

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[kissme_myfool]

Very lovely and I love that there is hope in their future :)

[butifulyletdown]

Thanks. There is always Chlark hope :-)

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

[blackheart_me]

OMG.

This was amazing.

I really loved this!

The different time lines made it even more wonderful and the end was just. GAH, speechless. Love it!

[butifulyletdown]

Thanks so much. Really glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[marikology]

omg that was so good. I loved the characterization. Great touch with the flashbacks and the way you contrasted Clark as a boy and a man in both parts of the story. Even though it didn't have a happy ending, it still ended on hopefulness.

[butifulyletdown]

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it and found the characterization up to par. :) Without hope for Chlark where would we be. :D

Thanks again for reading and commenting.