Oh, dear. Of course, one reason it makes such terrible dialog is that it wasn't written as dialog. She said she didn't know she was supposed to acknowledge her sources? She cut and pasted; that's not research.
Maybe the the wildlife writer should add in a passage to one of his articles like "The ferrets occasionally detour from their usual habitat and may come across a tent. In this tent..." and rip a huge chunk out of a romance novel.
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Maybe the the wildlife writer should add in a passage to one of his articles like "The ferrets occasionally detour from their usual habitat and may come across a tent. In this tent..." and rip a huge chunk out of a romance novel.
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