CIMH(MBM) [5/10?]

Dec 05, 2010 03:36



NOT REAL CHAPTER 5
Month Four. )

!jongkey, !chaptered, !cimh(mbm), !fanfic, !mpreg

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pinky_suju11 December 5 2010, 13:52:09 UTC
Who's the stalker?! Err.. The one who knows about Kibum's pregnancy~ Gaah! I'm really curious~! Update Update~! :D

And Kibum got a phone from Jessica? :O How I wish my Unnie was that nice ;__;

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twinklespink December 5 2010, 20:47:34 UTC
idek, jessica is my FAV SNSD member but everyone makes her so mean all the time so in my fics she's always nice :]

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pinky_suju11 December 6 2010, 06:30:57 UTC
Ikr? I mean she's nice. What's to hate? I dislike all anti's~

And yeah, Your fic rules! :D

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k_pop4life December 5 2010, 15:21:19 UTC
Im so happy you updated!!
THOSE TXTS ARE FREAKING ME OUT! I CANT BELIEVE SOMEONE KNOWS!
Maybe NIcole (since shes doing whatever she can to get JOnghyun) but how would she get his phone number so fast?
I want to have a serious talk with Kibum because OBVIOUSLY he's very confused! He makes out with his best friend and then calls Jonghyun telling him he misses HOME! I was soo glad they didnt do it because then that would've hurt Jonghyun but i hope Kibum gets over the rape thingy a little bit since i cant bear with that distance i wish they make up and while they still can they should do it and it would be so lovely and romantic! *sigh*
why didnt Kibum told Jong about Jennifer?
now im going to Wait for your next update which i hope comes soon

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twinklespink December 5 2010, 20:48:58 UTC
do it? as in have sex? lol. if only smut liked me.
you'll have to wait ^^

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a bit of critism, I´m really sorry but I couldn´t help... kovodielnik December 5 2010, 22:16:07 UTC
I don´t understand Kibum. Once he wants to puke cuz he just remembered his current boyfriend actually forced sex on him(although I didn´t get why he remembered it like three months afer it happened, it would get to him immediately)and next time he´s about to being fucked by his best friend. And then he writes Jonghyun sweet messages and is full of love again ( ... )

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Re: a bit of critism, I´m really sorry but I couldn´t help... twinklespink December 5 2010, 23:32:13 UTC
Really, it is VERY helpful.
I actually really rushed through this chapter and knew it didn't make a lot of sense but I posted it anyways just for the sake of having the readers get their weekly dosage.
I got influenced by the person I was talking to and her love life and I kinda messed up the chapter because of that. But I will redo this chapter.
Thanks a lot, I don't get many readers like you! :]

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