I just can't get over the way that you wrote the story from a child's point of view. When I read this I couls clearly hear the child-like voice of draco slowly and carefully enunciating each word as he wrote it down in his journal or something. Was that your aim when you wrote this? Also I can also sense little Draco's astute observation skills even though he doesn't understand half the things he takes note of. Kinda makes me think of my own childhood!
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Also I can also sense little Draco's astute observation skills even though he doesn't understand half the things he takes note of. Kinda makes me think of my own childhood!
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