The Doll Shop [5/?]

Feb 28, 2008 17:28

Title: The Doll Shop
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frerad, the doll shop story

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phantomsinmyeye May 12 2008, 02:47:05 UTC
Great job, again! ^.^

Hey, this has been bothering me for a while: You should use "breathe" when you're saying something like, "I can't breathe" and "breath" when you say something like, "He felt his breath against his cheek". You see what I'm saying?

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