An idea Digitaleopard and I came up with.

[bysmael]

The Exchange

The café was of an old European style in a thoroughly new American city. It was the sort that maintained the air of the old world by having a small fenced in area serviced by a wait staff in actual uniforms of black slacks and pressed white shirts with suspiciously clean aprons.

There were only two men in the

Comments

[strixluna]

Creepy :)

I like the dialogue, it flows very well.

[digitaleopard]

Dammit Ben! What's the point of long term planning if you're going to turn around and tell the world?