Rich, Red Rose

Jul 16, 2002 23:27

Cheri DuBock/edited by Hermana ( Read more... )

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d3prived1 July 17 2002, 16:28:20 UTC
it was really good.

here are some comments.

Mom complained about this. She didn't get along too well with Mima.
Mom complained about this; she didn't get along too well with Mima.
i'm not sure if that's correct.

"of Mima's age, and that we no longer lived close by to help. "
..and HOW we no longer lived...

" The days were begging for the clouds to cry"
WOW that was a great line! [claps like a lunatic]not stop for death- "because i could not stop for death, death stopped for me"- it's a famous poem either by emily dickison, or someone else ( ... )

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