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[c0nfused_loserr]

HEY losers... I have my own poem ready for you guys to go off and critique on. So please just look it over, and say SOMETHING, so I don't feel like it's a total failure. Mind you, I have to read this thing for the poetry festival, and I wouldn't want to kill my reputation as an overachiever! That'd be a horrible thought, eh?
So, just look it over,

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[flyingbearhug]

Don’t glance back onto your deviant trail.
You’re on the road most traveled,
Traveling to the place least unraveled.
Take your time, across the dubious rail.

i liked that passage the best.
but yes pretty advanced for a lil freshie ido say so myself *obnoxious wink*
some of it though to be perfectly honest is just.. verbiage.
but yeah it was still well written nontheless.
much love
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[c0nfused_loserr]

That's the point of it... *winks* verbiage, so that I can "look smart" and talk long enough on stage so I don't look like the biggest idiot... heh.
Oh well. Glad you liked. =D

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