Yes, instead of working on 30 Pieces, I did this...

[c_callosum]

Title: Promises unfulfilled
Summary: Whenever Luffy looks for Shanks, he's nowhere to be found.  Future fic. Inspired by Chapter 580.
Words: 398
A/N: Just copying this over from the recent One Piece chaos thread.  Prompt was "Hidden" by 

Comments

[slowsunrise]

Woooah, Like awesome! If my eyes could sparkle, they would.

[c_callosum]

Teehee. Thanks! Sometimes I wish my eyes could sparkle like Chopper's too...

[dandywonderous]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, this was AMAZING!!!!!!! SO COOL SO AWESOME SO.... Bah, English is not sufficient to express how I feel about this fic. So sad and yet so excellent. ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

And stfu, have you SEEN how far behind I am on 30_op and I'm STILL not working, I'm going to fail so epically...

[c_callosum]

Aww, thanks! It's okay, I get the picture. I'm glad you liked it.

Okay, I'll shut up then. *zips* *unzips* Chapapa!

[zelda_addict]

Very nice! I can easily see Shanks dong something like this... XD

I was also very amused by the crew's reaction to Luffy's bad "be like Gol D. Roger" joke!

This was also nicely insightful. Excellent work!

[c_callosum]

Thanks! I dunno, I felt it was a bit OOC of Shanks in the beginning, but then when the line came out about it giving Luffy more to strive for and maybe *not* go turn himself in like Roger, it sort of became like maybe Shanks was trying to prevent Luffy from turning out like his captain...in which case I could totally see it as something he would do!

Also, not to tease you or anything 'cause it could happen to anybody, but that was a particularly amusing typo in the first line. XP

I can just see them face-palming and saying "Luffyyyyyyyy" and everyone hitting him in the head.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

[zelda_addict]

That was totally not a Freudian slip,I swear! XD