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{ONESHOT} Bite Me /~the beta-ed version

Nov 03, 2008 17:05

Title: Bite Me
Pairing: YooSu
Kink: Rough Sex (and maybe slight BDSM, I think it's a pretty softcore smut though XD)
Summary: It's Halloween and everyone is searching for a monster to hook up with. Only Junsu's monster just might be the real thing.
Warning: nc17 smut, babies. don't like, don't read.

( Then it happened, teeth sunk sharply into his jugular and it felt as if the ache in him had been fulfilled. It burst out in satisfaction and made Junsu arch his back, pressing every bone in his body against Yoochun's slick frame, sweaty and tired as he shook from his climax. )

oneshot

Comments 91

junsu_luvr December 19 2008, 03:07:29 UTC

8OOOOOOO
HOLY!!!!!!!!!!! I think my brain just exploded from the awesomness of this. Srsly.
Vamp!Chun is....there aren't even words to describe it! And the smut! *melts into a puddle of senseless goo*
This is officially the best Vamp! Yoosu smut I have EVER read! EVER!!!!!
Can I friend you? :'D

c_h_i_b_i December 19 2008, 05:43:28 UTC

omg, u flatter me way too much 8DDDDDDDDD but i can't deny that i'm enjoying it XDDD <333 of course you can! ^.^

jirurukyungmi December 21 2008, 23:23:31 UTC

Pfieuw... *rubs eyes* god letting your eyes open for atleast 5 minutes isn't good...
I didn't even swallow... that was sooo *shiver*
Part 2? O___________O

c_h_i_b_i December 22 2008, 00:22:54 UTC

aw *rubs your eyes gently*
lol *wipes away the dribbling saliva* XDDDDD
part2? D8 i don't think im writing a part 2 TT.TT thanks so much for the comment!! <33

fairytokyo December 23 2008, 09:12:23 UTC

Holy shit, that was amazing.
Vampire Yoochun *dies*
Victim Junsu *dies*

That was so incredibly hot, yet so beautifully written.
I think I love this too much. D: ♥

c_h_i_b_i December 23 2008, 16:51:19 UTC

Yes, that's the best kind of vamp fic there is, right? XD Su fits the victim role ssssssssweeelll 8D

thanks so much for reading!! ^.^ *huggles*

simply_junsu January 18 2009, 18:29:39 UTC

Awwww....
Unbelievably wonderful......

c_h_i_b_i January 18 2009, 20:07:10 UTC

thank youuu! and welcome to my friends list 8DD u will never escape me now MWAHAHA ... o.o

simply_junsu January 19 2009, 05:55:26 UTC

I don't want to (escape...) ;p
Love love love...

ninok78 February 24 2009, 20:54:36 UTC

It was WOW. No coherent thought in my head right now. I'm under the spell of Yoochun-vampire too ))) It was a little bit cruel but really amazing. Thank you!

c_h_i_b_i February 25 2009, 05:41:52 UTC

Ah, a familiar face <3 XD Thank YOU! ^.^